The Ornamental and the Unseemly: On the Poetry of Nada Gordon

By Mira K. Vell

The extraordinary profusion of language in Nada Gordon’s poetry presents a difficulty for criticism that is not adequately addressed by invoking the usual vocabulary of experimental writing: disjunction, appropriation, polyphony, linguistic materiality, the destabilization of the lyric subject. Although all these terms describe important aspects of her practice, they tend to subordinate the sensuous particularity of her poems to a set of already familiar propositions about the nature of language. Gordon’s work, however, is distinguished not merely by its interrogation of signification but by an appetite for the physical, ornamental, erotic, and sometimes repellent properties of words, an appetite that persists even when the poems appear to distrust the legitimacy of such pleasures. Her poetry is extravagant, but its extravagance is never simply an assertion of freedom from constraint; it is continually interrupted by embarrassment, critical self-awareness, emotional vulnerability, and an almost compulsive need to argue with the conditions of its own production. The poems simultaneously pursue and ridicule poetic magnificence, exposing the cultural mechanisms through which some forms of verbal display acquire the dignity of art while others are dismissed as vulgar, feminine, excessive, or ridiculous. This conflict is not incidental to Gordon’s style. It generates the peculiar instability of her lyric voice, a voice capable of the most elaborate rhetorical exhibitionism while refusing to exempt its own performance from skeptical scrutiny. The resulting poetry is not merely ludic, nor does its comedy function as an agreeable disguise for an otherwise solemn intellectual project. Rather, its pleasures and its critical intelligence are frequently inseparable from one another, producing an art in which seriousness becomes most interesting at the moment when it is threatened by ridicule.

The historical complexity of Gordon’s work becomes clearer when its relation to the American experimental tradition is considered alongside intellectual and aesthetic inheritances that do not fit comfortably within that tradition’s conventional genealogies. The associative freedoms of John Ashbery and Frank O’Hara, the procedural investigations of Bernadette Mayer, Clark Coolidge’s improvisational attention to the sonic and material properties of words, and Language poetry’s sustained interrogation of reference and expressive subjectivity provide essential contexts for her writing, but they do not exhaust its ambitions. Mina Loy’s erotic and intellectual ferocity, Lewis Carroll’s systematic nonsense, the metaphysical conceits of George Herbert, the artificial paradises of Huysmans, and the theatrical, cinematic, and poetic experiments of Terayama Shūji offer equally suggestive points of comparison. These affiliations cannot be understood as a harmonious synthesis of compatible influences. The skepticism toward transparent expression associated with Language writing is not readily reconciled with Gordon’s unabashed investment in lyric affect; the compactness of Japanese short-form poetry appears initially incompatible with her seemingly inexhaustible elaborations; and the ornamental artificiality of decadence coexists uneasily with the improvisatory inclusiveness of the New York School. What gives Gordon’s writing its distinctive character is precisely the persistence of these tensions. Her poetry does not resolve them into a coherent aesthetic program but discovers in their interference a means of generating new forms of experience. Her participation in Flarf, moreover, should be understood within this longer history rather than made to account retroactively for the earlier work. The poems collected in The Sound Princess: Selected Poems 1985–2015 demonstrate that her investigations of linguistic accident, bodily experience, borrowed discourse, and unstable subjectivity were underway well before the emergence of Flarf as a recognizable movement. What the internet and the collective procedures of Flarf made newly available was an enormously expanded archive of verbal material through which preexisting aesthetic interests could be pursued.

One of Gordon’s most illuminating descriptions of her own compositional activity involves the figure of the hermit crab, a creature that inhabits a structure it has not itself produced. The metaphor suggests a relation to inherited forms that differs both from conventional imitation and from appropriation understood as the neutral transfer of material into a new context. Gordon has described a practice of looking at an existing text, sometimes almost squinting at it, and allowing the visible and audible properties of words to suggest alternative language, producing substitutions that may begin as parody or pastiche but eventually acquire an imaginative existence largely independent of the original. The resulting work does not simply quote its predecessor or arrange fragments from it. It occupies the predecessor’s formal and rhetorical architecture, making that structure available for transformations whose direction cannot be entirely anticipated. Such an account is especially useful for understanding her rewritings of George Herbert, her occupation of familiar television and theatrical situations, and her use of inherited poetic forms. Yet the hermit-crab analogy is also instructively imperfect. The animal may occupy its shell without materially transforming it, whereas Gordon frequently subjects the borrowed structure to such radical deformation that the distinction between habitation and reconstruction becomes difficult to sustain. More importantly, the analogy raises the question of what constitutes a poetic shell in the first place: an arrangement of lines, a recognizable literary genre, an ideological proposition, a social situation, or the accumulated expectations through which a reader recognizes a particular kind of utterance? Gordon’s work repeatedly suggests that these structures are inseparable, that to inhabit an inherited form is also to enter the historical and social relations it carries. Her originality resides not in an imagined emancipation from influence but in the exceptionally inventive ways she inhabits forms that are never entirely her own.

This relationship between inheritance and transformation is already evident in “jordan iv,” an early rewriting of Herbert’s “Jordan” poems, where Gordon takes up the devotional poet’s suspicion of rhetorical ornament and converts it into an unstable meditation on the pleasures of verbal elaboration. The speaker remembers an enthusiasm for language that threatens to overwhelm the ideas it is supposed to communicate:

My thoughts got top-heavy, covered with curlicues,
Decking the sense, as if it were to sell.

The lines acknowledge the familiar objection that elaborate poetic diction may become an impediment to sincerity, but the acknowledgment is itself conspicuously embellished. “Curlicues” is at once the name of an ornamental excess and a delightfully curling verbal object, its sounds performing the decorative movement it ostensibly condemns. The image of thoughts becoming “top-heavy” gives a physical instability to an intellectual predicament, as though the weight of verbal decoration might cause the conceptual structure beneath it to topple. Yet the poem’s relation to Herbert is more complicated than a simple defense of artificiality against devotional plainness. By inhabiting the earlier poem’s argumentative structure, Gordon makes its supposedly corrective appeal to sincerity appear equally dependent upon literary convention. The desire to express love directly remains real, but the language through which such directness is recommended is itself inherited, stylized, and historically situated. The conflict is therefore not between an authentic feeling and the artificial language that distorts it, but among competing rhetorical procedures, each of which offers particular possibilities and limitations for emotional expression. Gordon’s speaker is embarrassed by her own appetite for ornament without becoming willing to relinquish it, a predicament that recurs throughout her work and provides one of the principal sources of its comedy.

A more extensive example occurs in “Gorgeous,” from V. Imp, a poem whose fourteen-page expanse is constructed largely from brief, asterisk-separated units, many of them resembling drastically compressed haiku or tanka. Its relationship to Japanese short-form poetry is especially suggestive when considered through the example of Terayama Shūji, whose experimental tanka sequences introduced surrealist displacement, eroticism, popular culture, and theatrical artificiality into forms frequently associated with lyric concentration. Gordon’s Japanese affinities are not confined to literary technique: her work repeatedly draws upon Japanese language, popular imagery, performance, and the stylized pleasures of what might be called Japanoiserie, a category that necessarily involves questions of cultural mediation and imaginative fabrication as well as direct experience. In “Gorgeous,” however, the influence is most consequential at the level of formal organization. The individual units possess a degree of autonomy, each offering a miniature field of perception or verbal transformation, while their accumulation produces an extended, discontinuous performance of consciousness. The poem’s three divisions, designated “Fits,” also recall the episodic structure of Carroll’s The Hunting of the Snark, introducing a further association between literary composition, involuntary disturbance, and theatrical nonsense. Gordon’s miniature forms are thus continually unsettled by the larger structures in which they participate. Their brevity concentrates attention upon the smallest syntactic and phonetic decisions, while their arrangement in an extended sequence prevents any single moment from achieving the closure or self-sufficiency that the miniature might appear to promise.

Consider a three-line unit from the opening Fit:

otter games and
more distantly
the water (wonder) horse

The apparent simplicity of the first line is already unstable, since “games” attributes a recognizable category of human activity to the animals under observation. The second line introduces a movement of spatial recession whose object remains uncertain until the final phrase arrives, where the “water (wonder) horse” transforms the apparently natural scene into a linguistic and imaginative event. The parenthesis is crucial because it neither replaces “water” with “wonder” nor allows the two terms to become entirely separate. Instead, the reader is made to experience their simultaneous presence, the second word emerging within the first through a slight alteration of its material form. The transition from animal observation to mythical possibility is therefore inseparable from a visible operation upon language. The unit possesses something of the charged juxtaposition associated with Japanese short-form poetry, but its effects also recall Coolidge’s willingness to allow the phonetic and morphological properties of words to generate unexpected compositional movement. Gordon’s procedure is not reducible to either antecedent. The miniature’s concentrated architecture intensifies the improvisatory transformation, while the transformation itself prevents the unit from becoming a stable image of the natural world. Something similar occurs in the astonishingly compressed “purely zinnia: delusion,” where the colon, conventionally an instrument of definition or explanation, introduces a relation whose terms resist any obvious paraphrase. The specific flower is confronted with an abstraction that seems to diagnose or explain it, yet the apparent equivalence is neither logical nor merely arbitrary. The punctuation performs the gesture of clarification while refusing its expected result, producing a miniature instance of the disciplined irrationality that characterizes Carroll’s nonsense. Gordon’s work frequently proceeds through such displacements of rhetorical convention, allowing the recognizable forms of explanation, argument, or description to produce consequences that disturb the authority those forms ordinarily claim.

The comic intelligence of “Gorgeous” becomes especially apparent in another miniature:

granite taken for styrofoam
out of the doldrums
and into—pardon me—puissance

The initial confusion between granite and Styrofoam establishes a tactile and conceptual reversal between heaviness and lightness, durability and disposability, while the second line begins an idiomatic movement whose conclusion appears to promise some conventional form of renewed vitality. Instead, the poem arrives at the magnificently inflated “puissance,” but only after a tiny interruption in which the speaker appears to apologize for the extravagance of her own diction. This “pardon me” constitutes a theatrical event whose scale is inversely proportional to its implications. The speaker, having prepared the conditions for her own rhetorical elevation, momentarily steps outside the performance in order to acknowledge its possible absurdity; yet the acknowledgment is itself part of the performance, functioning simultaneously as apology, comic delay, provocation, and an advertisement for the very verbal excess it purports to excuse. One might hear in this gesture an inheritance from Jewish comic performance, particularly the self-interrupting monologue in which the speaker anticipates the audience’s suspicion of grandiosity and converts that suspicion into an additional source of authority. But the moment also exemplifies a more general Gordonian procedure in which the poem incorporates its own skeptical reader, refusing to allow the literary utterance to preserve an uncontested dignity. The word puissance does not simply announce power; it acquires its peculiar force through the staged embarrassment of its arrival, as though linguistic authority could be exercised only by first exposing its pretensions. Gordon does not renounce the grand word. She enjoys it, but makes its enjoyment inseparable from the comedy of having chosen it. The resulting utterance is neither a straightforward assertion of poetic mastery nor an act of self-effacement. It is an agonistic performance in which literary ambition and the ridicule of literary ambition become mutually sustaining activities.

Such self-interruption has affinities with traditions of Jewish theatrical and verbal comedy that extend from Yiddish popular performance through American vaudeville, early Hollywood, and the comedy of the Marx Brothers and Mel Brooks. Gordon’s own engagement with Molly Picon, whom she once discussed in a presentation at the Workmen’s Circle, makes the connection more than a purely abstract historical parallel, although its significance should not be reduced to a claim of direct stylistic descent. What matters is the availability of a comic repertoire in which the performer cultivates intimacy with the audience through self-deprecation, anticipates hostile judgment, and punctures the dignity of her own declarations without necessarily surrendering their force. Such practices also circulate through familial speech, where argument, affectionate mockery, exaggerated complaint, and the theatrical presentation of one’s own inadequacies may become habitual ways of negotiating intimacy and authority. Gordon’s poetry transforms these conversational procedures into formal devices: parenthetical interruptions, sudden changes of register, direct addresses, apologies, confessions, and deliberate failures of rhetorical elevation. The historical tensions within Yiddish theatre between popular entertainment dismissed as shund and the aspirations of more respectable dramatic art offer a further, particularly suggestive analogy for Gordon’s quarrel with the institutions of poetic seriousness. Her writing repeatedly asks why certain kinds of verbal display should be regarded as intellectually legitimate while others, especially those associated with feminine ornament, vulgar pleasure, comic excess, or theatrical exhibitionism, are relegated to a supposedly inferior aesthetic order. Yet her challenge to these hierarchies is complicated by her own desire for recognition. She does not inhabit the comfortable position of an artist who has transcended the need for literary prestige. Her speakers frequently want the very distinctions they ridicule, and their self-deprecation becomes more consequential because it does not free them from vanity, competitiveness, or disappointment.

The importance of this comic self-implication becomes unmistakable in “Genius Grant: A Hateful Sestina,” from Emotional Support Peacock, where the institutional vocabulary of literary ambition is subjected to the repetitive machinery of an inherited poetic form. Grants, fellowships, residencies, workshops, and the tenure track become the recurrent terms through which the sestina organizes its aggression, while Gordon’s phonetic transformations disclose the absurdity latent in the language of professional recognition. The movement from “tenure” toward “tenor,” “tin ear,” and “manure” does not merely produce a series of jokes; it reveals the instability of the institutional distinctions that these words are ordinarily employed to secure. The poem’s formal constraint becomes an analogue for the repetitive social structures through which literary success is imagined and pursued. Yet the speaker’s antagonism is persistently compromised by her own participation in those structures. The wish for distinction survives the exposure of distinction’s absurdity. This is one of the reasons Gordon’s relation to mainstream or supposedly serious poetry cannot be adequately described as simple opposition. Her work is engaged in a continuing struggle with the aesthetic and institutional conditions of literary value, a struggle that also extends into the experimental traditions to which she belongs. Language poetry, conceptual writing, Flarf, and the New York School may provide alternative methods and forms of legitimacy, but none remains exempt from Gordon’s skeptical intelligence. The comic agon takes place within the avant-garde as well as against the literary mainstream, and its energy derives partly from the poet’s refusal to imagine that any particular aesthetic affiliation can resolve the contradictions of artistic ambition.

If this aspect of Gordon’s work emphasizes its argumentative and theatrical character, “Poetry Is Junk,” from Vile Lilt, provides a more expansive account of the relationship between ornament, embodiment, and subjectivity. The poem begins with an epigraph from Adolf Loos’s “Ornament and Crime,” placing its elaborate decorative vocabulary within a history of modernist suspicion toward ornament as culturally regressive or aesthetically superfluous. Yet Gordon’s response does not simply reverse the hierarchy by declaring ornament superior to the unadorned. Instead, the poem constructs an extraordinarily elaborate verbal environment in which fashion, femininity, erotic activity, bodily secretion, and theories of authorship become inseparable. The opening instructions concerning the animation of costume suggest that personality is not an autonomous interior substance subsequently expressed through external appearance, but something constituted through the successful inhabitation of a socially available form. Gordon’s speaker becomes increasingly difficult to distinguish from the fabrics, ornaments, and bodily materials with which she surrounds herself, and the supposed boundary between decorative surface and authentic self begins to dissolve. The poem’s argument is thus performed through its own compositional procedures, which incorporate inherited statements, fragments of other people’s language, and shifts among incompatible registers. Its dense ornamental texture is not a covering concealing an otherwise transparent proposition; it is the means through which the proposition becomes available.

The most explicit formulation of this conception of authorship occurs in the deceptively simple declaration:

Expression irrigates expression.

The verb “irrigates” transforms literary influence into a material and ecological process, suggesting the movement of nourishment across boundaries rather than a succession of discrete intellectual inheritances. Gordon develops the idea through quotations from contemporary writers, including Rob Fitterman and Drew Gardner, whose observations concerning impersonal subjectivity and collective handwriting become part of the poem’s own argument. Their incorporation is not merely illustrative. It enacts the claim that individual expression is constituted through the circulation of language among speakers. A few lines later Gordon asks, “Who’s containable?” and answers, “I’m all apertures,” a formulation more precise than the familiar avant-garde celebration of uncontainability. An aperture is not simply an absence of boundaries but an opening within a structure, a point through which light, air, sound, or bodily material may pass. The speaker is therefore imagined not as an emancipated self overflowing its limits but as a system of exchanges, simultaneously constituted and transformed by what enters it. This conception has evident affinities with Language writing’s interrogation of the autonomous lyric subject, but Gordon’s formulation introduces an insistently erotic and affective dimension. Her collective self is not impersonal in the sense of being emotionally evacuated. It is porous because it desires, absorbs, responds, and becomes entangled with the language and sensations of others.

The presence of Mina Loy within “Poetry Is Junk” is especially significant in this respect. Gordon incorporates Loy’s formulation of love as an expansion of self-sympathy, allowing the modernist predecessor’s account of erotic and ethical identification to become part of an argument about the affective possibilities of appropriation. The borrowed phrase becomes meaningful not because it is detached from its prior context but because it is made available for renewed inhabitation. Gordon’s practice thus complicates any easy opposition between conceptual impersonality and lyric intimacy. The language of others enters the poem through a desire for connection that is itself inseparable from the pleasure of verbal transformation. This is also why the poem’s sustained attention to lace-making matters. Lace provides a material analogue for the relation between inherited language and individual invention, a pattern produced through the intertwining of threads whose significance depends upon both connection and open space. Its labor is repetitive, intricate, and technically demanding, yet its products have often been relegated to the supposedly secondary domain of feminine decoration. Gordon’s verbal lacework challenges that hierarchy by making ornamental construction a mode of intellectual activity, while refusing to purify ornament of its associations with erotic display, commodity culture, and the social regulation of femininity. Decoration is neither innocent nor merely oppressive. It is a field of contradictory pleasures and constraints through which the self may become visible, vulnerable, and imaginatively transformed.

The question of beauty becomes especially difficult here, because Gordon’s work repeatedly produces experiences of genuine lyric beauty through materials that seem designed to resist conventional aesthetic idealization. The relevant comparison is perhaps André Breton’s notion of beauté convulsive, a beauty arising through the sudden disruption of familiar relations and the encounter with forms that unsettle the boundaries between the marvelous and the ordinary. Yet Gordon’s beauty is not simply surrealist convulsion transferred into the field of contemporary experimental poetry. It is frequently convulsed by laughter, embarrassed by its own aspirations, and contaminated by bodily materials that conventional lyric beauty has historically sought to exclude. The grotesque is not merely the dark underside of a more elevated aesthetic; it becomes part of the experience of beauty itself. In Gordon, a flower may resemble an organ, an anatomical feature may become a decorative flourish, and the awkward physicality of an animal may acquire an almost unbearable tenderness. Her poetry does not consistently ask the reader to look past ugliness in order to discover beauty beneath it. Instead, it makes the categories interfere with one another, allowing the sensuous intensity of an image to persist even when its constituent materials appear ridiculous, vulgar, or repellent. The possibility of such beauty is inseparable from the poet’s reluctance to accept established conventions governing what may legitimately be admired.

This problem is beautifully dramatized in “Mauvais Song,” from Emotional Support Peacock, where Gordon looks back upon an earlier experience of linguistic abundance with a mixture of longing, skepticism, and loss. The poem begins by recalling a world that seemed saturated with movement and sensation:

Once everything was magnolian*,
It shimmied and fumed, was shot through
With motion, with vascular fibers of gleaming.

The invented adjective “magnolian” transforms the flower into a condition of existence, suggesting not merely that the world resembled a magnolia but that its very atmosphere had acquired the flower’s sensuous properties. Yet the following verbs, “shimmied” and “fumed,” introduce bodily movement and chemical instability into the floral image, while “vascular fibers of gleaming” makes luminosity seem anatomically organized. The beauty is neither serene nor stable. It is animated by processes that threaten to exceed the forms through which they become perceptible. The poem’s subsequent recollection of opening books and experiencing a rush of linguistic elation suggests that reading once offered an almost intoxicating access to such transformations, an experience now compromised by distraction, technological mediation, and the awareness of historical and personal diminishment. The speaker’s longing is not simply for youth or for a lost cultural moment, but for a mode of receptivity through which language seemed capable of renewing the world’s perceptual intensity.

Yet “Mauvais Song” does not settle into elegy. Its associative movements continually interrupt the possibility of a sustained lament, introducing comic self-reproach, phonetic play, abrupt changes of scale, and bodily grotesquerie. The speaker’s consciousness becomes something buttery, fragrant, and excessive, while the poem’s rhythms deliberately resist the smoothness of conventional lyric consolation. Its beauty is inseparable from its awkwardness. The desire for the world to become newly radiant persists, but it can no longer be expressed without acknowledging the failures and distractions that compromise the speaker’s attention. The poem is moving partly because it refuses to purify its longing of absurdity. The lyric impulse survives, but it does so in a damaged, self-conscious, and extravagantly artificial form.

A related tension governs “Dismay,” from Scented Rushes, whose compressed account of romantic jealousy moves among erotic longing, resentment, and self-ridicule. The poem’s speaker imagines imitating a rival in order to enter the beloved’s emotional world, but the fantasy collapses into a painfully ordinary recognition:

I can’t
get her haircut: I don’t
have that kind of hair.

The bathos is exquisite. An elaborate drama of erotic displacement and imagined identification encounters the stubborn material fact of a hairstyle. Yet the joke does not cancel the emotional injury. Indeed, it makes the injury more exact by locating it within the body’s particular limitations. The speaker cannot become the rival because her body will not permit the necessary transformation, and the absurdity of the obstacle intensifies rather than diminishes the experience of exclusion. The poem’s concluding movement returns to the humiliations of unreciprocated attachment, exposing the speaker’s bitterness without granting her the consolations of moral superiority. Here Gordon’s self-deprecation is inseparable from a lyric tenderness that the poem repeatedly attempts to undermine. Its beauty resides partly in the refusal to make emotional pain more dignified than it actually is.

The relationship between beauty and the grotesque becomes especially expansive in “Coney Island Avenue,” where Gordon’s attention moves through the heterogeneous commercial, linguistic, and cultural environment of Brooklyn. The poem’s abundant catalogues of businesses, religious institutions, foods, advertisements, clothing, and overheard language produce a crowded verbal landscape in which the social world appears simultaneously exhilarating and oppressive. Its descriptions refuse the distance of ethnographic observation, continually allowing the speaker’s desires, associations, and sensory responses to intervene in the apparent documentation of place. The resulting poem has something of the flâneur’s appetite for urban spectacle, but its movements are more bodily and less detached, implicated in the very systems of consumption, migration, and cultural exchange it describes. Its accumulation of names and objects becomes a form of ecstatic attention, though one continually threatened by the violence and absurdity of the historical world.

Near the poem’s conclusion, this verbal proliferation suddenly yields to a remarkable concentration:

And then the paralyzing rush of emotion:

The phrase announces an experience whose intensity seems to arrest the poem’s previous movement. What follows is an image of grace entering faces through a condition of dissonant gaiety. The effect is extraordinary partly because the poem has refused to prepare for it through the conventional procedures of lyric elevation. No purified landscape has been established, no exemplary figure selected as the vehicle of transcendence, no stable opposition constructed between the degraded world and an idealized realm beyond it. Instead, the experience of grace emerges from the crowded, contradictory, commercially saturated environment the poem has been inhabiting all along. The apparent disorder of the preceding catalogue becomes retrospectively inseparable from the possibility of revelation. Yet the emotion remains “paralyzing,” a term that suggests disturbance as much as fulfillment. The beauty does not resolve the dissonance. It occurs through it.

This is perhaps the point at which Breton’s convulsive beauty becomes most illuminating, provided that the comparison is allowed to remain difficult. Gordon’s poems repeatedly discover beauty through discontinuity, unexpected juxtaposition, erotic disturbance, and transformations of scale, but the experience is seldom unaccompanied by comedy. Their convulsions may be those of laughter as readily as desire or terror, and the apparent dignity of lyric revelation is continually at risk of being interrupted by the arrival of something ridiculous. Yet such interruptions need not diminish the revelation. They may prevent it from becoming formulaic, preserving the experience of beauty as something irreducible to an established aesthetic category. Gordon’s poems are often most beautiful when they are most reluctant to announce themselves as beautiful, when their verbal extravagance unexpectedly produces an emotional or perceptual intensity that neither the speaker nor the reader can fully assimilate.

The theatrical works develop this unstable relation between beauty, comedy, and violence in explicitly social terms. In at home with the Petries, Gordon inhabits the familiar domestic environment of The Dick Van Dyke Show, preserving the recognizability of its characters and conversational conventions while transforming the household into a grotesque economy of bodily consumption. Rob’s request for breakfast eggs becomes a demand for Laura’s reproductive organs, while the family’s repeated expressions of hunger progressively expose the apparently limitless claims made upon the maternal body. The play’s comedy depends upon the sitcom’s ability to accommodate increasingly monstrous demands without abandoning its reassuring domestic idiom. Yet the work is not simply a parody of patriarchal family arrangements. Laura’s reflections upon childbirth introduce a moment of genuine wonder into the surrounding grotesquerie, acknowledging the extraordinary fact of having produced another human being even as the play develops toward the literal consumption of her body. The tenderness and the horror are not neatly separable. They arise from the same experience of maternal embodiment, whose possibilities for affection and vulnerability are inseparable from the demands it invites.

Laura’s final resurrection and declaration of the play’s ending exemplify Gordon’s persistent use of fourth-wall-breaking as a means of disturbing the authority of inherited forms. The woman who has been consumed within the domestic fiction reclaims the ability to terminate the performance itself, an assertion of theatrical agency that does not simply undo the violence but changes the terms through which it can be represented. A similar procedure governs Beatles Ex-Wives Reunion, where a genteel social gathering becomes the occasion for increasingly unstable and aggressive discourse about gender, celebrity, and heterosexual attachment. Gordon’s practice of reversing quotations and reassigning ideological language makes familiar arguments difficult to locate within their customary positions. The resulting comedy exposes the contradictions of the cultural scripts through which the women have been defined, while the final destruction of their teacups literalizes the violence contained within the rituals of feminine politeness. In both works, the borrowed theatrical structure becomes the occasion for a critique that cannot be separated from the pleasures of performance. The comedy does not merely reveal an underlying seriousness; it constitutes one of the principal means through which that seriousness becomes available.

The agonistic relation between Gordon’s work and the institutions of poetry receives its most sustained examination in “Sturm,” the concluding long poem of Emotional Support Peacock. Beginning with an invitation to contribute to a project commemorating Hurricane Sandy, accompanied by an offer of payment, the poem immediately discloses the speaker’s excitement about earning money and her uncertainty about representing a catastrophe from which she personally suffered little. Its opening violates the expected decorum of the occasion by exposing motivations that a more conventionally serious poem might conceal. The resulting comedy is also an ethical intervention, since the speaker refuses to present herself as a transparent vehicle for collective suffering when her actual circumstances are considerably more compromised. The poem subsequently considers and abandons a succession of compositional approaches, including rewriting Ginsberg’s Howl, producing a visual poem in the form of a cyclone, and assembling documentary materials. Each possibility encounters an objection, sometimes practical, sometimes aesthetic, sometimes ethical. The work becomes an account of its own inability to discover an adequate form, a failure that generates the poem rather than preventing its existence.

At one point Gordon offers a devastatingly compressed inventory of available poetic procedures, dismissing Flarf as overly clever, conceptualism as insufficiently affective, documentary poetry as excessively earnest, and Language poetry as belated. The judgments are impatient, reductive, and deliberately funny, but their force derives from the fact that they implicate traditions central to Gordon’s own practice. The speaker cannot achieve a stable critical position by rejecting the methods she has inherited, since her poem continues to depend upon their possibilities. Its subsequent movement through spirals, galaxies, cinematic imagery, Japanese manga, and increasingly extravagant verbal transformations makes this contradiction formally productive. The poem begins to imitate the centrifugal activity it describes, circling among competing aesthetic possibilities without arriving at a definitive resolution. Its engagement with M. NourbeSe Philip’s Zong! further complicates the question of beauty by confronting the extraordinary formal inventiveness of a work concerned with historical atrocity. Gordon recognizes that linguistic fracture may be essential to the representation of experiences that resist ordinary comprehension, while remaining suspicious of any aesthetic procedure that would convert suffering too easily into literary prestige.

The poem’s revision of a statement by Seamus Heaney concerning poetry’s responsibility to disclose truth provides a particularly clear example of Gordon’s hermit-crab procedure. She enters the rhetorical structure of an inherited proposition and reverses its values, imagining poetry as a means of becoming more artificial, compromised, and fragmented rather than more authentic and whole. The gesture is comic, but its implications are substantial. Gordon refuses the assumption that poetry’s ethical legitimacy must depend upon its capacity to produce a purified subject or a transparent account of experience. Yet the refusal does not establish an alternative doctrine of aesthetic irresponsibility. “Sturm” remains troubled by the actual suffering caused by the hurricane and by the speaker’s distance from that suffering. Its ethical seriousness lies partly in the persistence of that difficulty, in the unwillingness to resolve it through a reassuring declaration of artistic principle. The poem’s eventual acknowledgment that the various forms of poetry may derive their value from their very wrongness offers no comfortable solution. Rather, it suggests that artistic practice may be most consequential when it remains conscious of the inadequacies of its own procedures.

Gordon’s later work repeatedly returns to the question of what poetry might still provide under conditions of aesthetic exhaustion, political disillusionment, and diminished confidence in inherited literary forms. “What do I want from a poem anymore?” imagines the poem as an object that might hang, dangle, or become a toy, then revises the apparent rejection of poetry into a desire to unite the toy and the poem. The revision is crucial, since the artificiality of the toy does not prevent it from becoming an object of genuine emotional investment. Gordon’s subsequent acknowledgment of her affection for fictional television characters extends the argument beyond literary form, suggesting that the distinction between the real and the fabricated cannot adequately account for the emotional consequences of art. The toy, the diorama, and the hermit crab thus become related figures for a poetics in which imaginative life takes place through the occupation and animation of constructed structures. They also complicate any attempt to characterize Gordon’s writing through a generalized celebration of uncontainability. Her work is deeply invested in containers, costumes, miniature environments, poetic forms, and inherited rhetorical architectures. Its extraordinary verbal abundance frequently arises through the resistance these structures offer.

What ultimately distinguishes Gordon’s poetry is not simply its willingness to incorporate materials excluded from conventional lyric decorum, but its insistence that the relations among beauty, ugliness, sincerity, artifice, intellectual ambition, and emotional vulnerability remain unresolved. The comic performer who apologizes for her own grandiosity does not thereby cease to desire magnificence; the poet who exposes the compromised motivations of literary production does not abandon the wish to make something beautiful; the writer who insists upon the collective nature of language continues to produce a voice of extraordinary singularity. These contradictions are not weaknesses awaiting theoretical correction. They are among the principal conditions of the work’s imaginative vitality. Gordon’s poetry is most consequential when it refuses to permit any one of its impulses to establish unquestioned authority over the others.

The formulation “I’m all apertures” is therefore less a declaration of unrestricted freedom than an acknowledgment of constitutive exposure. The poet is open to other voices, inherited forms, bodily sensations, cultural fantasies, and the irreducible disorder of social life, but that openness is not without cost. It makes possible both imaginative invention and emotional injury, both lyric beauty and the grotesque distortions through which such beauty becomes perceptible. Gordon’s poems frequently seek an intensity of experience that conventional aesthetic categories cannot accommodate, but they also remain suspicious of the rhetoric through which intensity is elevated into artistic virtue. Their beauty is sometimes convulsive, sometimes tender, sometimes ridiculous, and often difficult to distinguish from the disturbances that threaten it. Rather than purifying the lyric of those disturbances, Gordon allows them to enter its very constitution, discovering within the awkward, the ornamental, the embarrassing, and the excessive possibilities of feeling that a more disciplined art might have excluded.

The unresolved question is whether the singularity of Gordon’s poetic voice can be understood apart from its insistence upon the collective, borrowed, and endlessly transformable character of language. Her poems suggest that it cannot. Their unmistakable temperament emerges through an extraordinary receptivity to materials that belong to no single speaker, while their most intimate moments remain inseparable from the conventions, quotations, jokes, and inherited structures through which experience becomes articulate. Such a poetics does not restore the sovereign lyric subject after the critiques of Language writing, nor does it accept the evacuation of affect as the necessary consequence of those critiques. It discovers, rather, that the very instability of individual expression may provide the conditions for a more complicated emotional and aesthetic life. Gordon’s poems remain crowded with other people’s language, yet they are never merely impersonal; they are intensely artificial, yet they repeatedly produce genuine feeling; they are ridiculous, yet their ridicule does not exhaust the seriousness of what they disclose. The peculiar beauty of this work arises within those contradictions, where the language of the world, in all its vulgarity and magnificence, becomes something at once recognizably inherited and unexpectedly strange.


About the author

Mira K. Vell is an independent scholar specializing in experimental poetics, literary nonsense, and the aesthetics of excess. She is the author of The Unbecoming of Sense: Ornament, Error, and the Lyric Grotesque (2014) and A Theory of Too Much: Excess, Embarrassment, and the Comic Sublime (2021). Her current project, Kvell and Trembling: Toward a Minor Theory of Enthusiasm, has been repeatedly delayed by the proliferation of its footnotes.

Editorial note: Mira K. Vell is a fictional scholarly persona. This essay was developed through an extended critical dialogue between Nada Gordon and ChatGPT.

The Pounethical Wager

The robot wrote this, not me.

THE POUNETHICAL WAGER

Toward a Theory of Irresponsible Seriousness

A Brief Monograph

Preface: Against the Tyranny of Consequence

In The Poethical Wager, Joan Retallack proposes a poetics enlarged by ethical responsibility, a practice of making that recognizes its implication in the world. The addition of the h to poetics marks a commitment to the difficult work of living among others, embracing contingency, and producing forms adequate to the complexities of experience.

University of California Press

The present monograph proposes a modest but consequential subtraction: the removal of responsibility as poetry’s necessary justification and the substitution of the pun as the fundamental unit of poetic ethics.

We call this pounethics.

Where poethics asks what poetry can do for the world, pounethics asks what happens when the world is obliged to endure poetry.

The distinction is not trivial.

Neither is it entirely serious.

This is our wager.

I. The Pun as Epistemological Catastrophe

The pun is traditionally regarded as the lowest form of wit, a judgment that mistakes altitude for significance.

Indeed, the pun occupies a peculiarly disreputable position in the hierarchy of literary devices. It is tolerated in Shakespeare, deplored in conversation, and frequently punished by groaning. Yet this very disreputability constitutes its philosophical importance.

The pun exposes the scandal that language means more than it means to.

Consider the word sole.

It designates the bottom of a foot, a fish, and, when sounded, a soul. The proximity of these meanings does not necessarily disclose any profound metaphysical relationship between fish, feet, and the immaterial essence of human beings. Rather, it discloses the absurdity of supposing that meaning must always be justified by profundity.

A fish is not a soul.

Yet a fish can be a sole.

And a sole can be lost.

The pounethical thinker refuses to resolve this difficulty.

More importantly, the pounethical thinker refuses to pretend that it is a difficulty.

II. Against the Ethical Imperative

Contemporary experimental poetics has frequently been called upon to account for its political, social, and ethical implications. The poet is asked to acknowledge complicity, practice attentiveness, embrace alterity, resist dominant structures, and cultivate modes of responsible engagement.

These are admirable activities.

They are also exhausting.

Pounethics proposes that the burden of moral seriousness has become so thoroughly attached to poetic experimentation that the poem risks being transformed into an exceptionally elaborate declaration of good intentions.

The pounethical poem declines this assignment.

It need not improve the reader.

It need not model a desirable form of social interaction.

It need not even be particularly good.

Indeed, the bad pun, in its glorious indifference to approval, may offer a more radical model of poetic freedom than the most scrupulously constructed ethical statement.

The bad pun knows that it is bad and proceeds anyway.

It is, in this respect, a model of courage.

III. The Swerve and the Swivel

Retallack’s poethical wager draws upon the Epicurean swerve, that unpredictable departure from predetermined trajectories through which contingency enters the universe.

Pounethics replaces the swerve with the swivel.

The distinction is essential.

The swerve alters a trajectory.

The swivel remains more or less in place while changing its orientation.

A swivel chair is therefore the exemplary pounethical apparatus.

Seated in such a chair, the poet may confront the world, turn away from it, confront it again, and eventually become dizzy.

No progress is guaranteed.

No revolutionary transformation is necessarily achieved.

Nevertheless, something has turned.

This is sufficient.

The swivel also describes the movement of the pun, which does not escape language but rotates within it, revealing an entirely different semantic landscape without traveling anywhere.

The pounethical poet is thus a traveler who never leaves the premises.

IV. The Ethics of the Groan

The groan is the characteristic reception of the pun.

Unlike laughter, which may signify pleasure, surprise, superiority, or nervousness, the groan registers the listener’s simultaneous comprehension and refusal.

The groaner understands the pun perfectly.

This is precisely the problem.

A successful pun produces an involuntary recognition of a connection the listener would prefer not to acknowledge. Its force lies in compelling participation without securing consent to enjoyment.

The ethical dimensions of this event are not entirely comfortable.

Nevertheless, the groan establishes a form of social intimacy unavailable to the solemn pronouncement. One cannot groan at a pun without having participated, however reluctantly, in its production of meaning.

The pounethical community is therefore constituted not through agreement but through shared exasperation.

Its members are united by the recognition that something terrible has happened to language and that everyone is implicated.

V. On the Right to Be Ridiculous

One of the central assumptions of the poethical project is that aesthetic practice participates in the construction of forms of life.

Pounethics accepts this proposition while rejecting the implication that the forms of life so constructed must be ethically exemplary.

Ridiculousness is also a form of life.

Indeed, the ridiculous may possess a peculiar value in a culture that demands that every activity demonstrate its seriousness, utility, productivity, or moral legitimacy.

The pun refuses such accounting.

It wastes time.

It diverts attention.

It makes an already complicated world unnecessarily more complicated.

It gives us two things where one would have sufficed.

In doing so, it challenges the economy of significance itself.

Why must the poet produce significance when language is already producing a surplus of it?

Why must every surprise become an occasion for ethical improvement?

Why not allow the surprise to remain a surprise, or to deteriorate into a joke?

The pounethical wager is that the permission to be ridiculous may itself be a necessary condition of intellectual and imaginative freedom.

Not every deviation needs to become a destination.

Some are simply detours.

Others are de-tours.

And some, admittedly, should never have been attempted.

VI. Toward a Pounethical Practice

The pounethical practitioner must cultivate a particular disposition toward language.

She must be willing to mistake one word for another, to follow a resemblance beyond the limits of plausibility, to entertain propositions that have no business appearing together, and to relinquish the comforting assumption that linguistic accidents conceal important truths.

For pounethics is not a hermeneutics of hidden meaning.

The pun does not uncover a secret buried beneath the surface of language.

It produces a temporary collision on that surface.

Meaning is not excavated.

It is sideswiped.

A pounethical practice therefore encourages a disciplined irresponsibility toward interpretation. One must attend closely to language while remaining cheerfully indifferent to whether the resulting observations deserve to exist.

This indifference should not be confused with carelessness.

To construct a genuinely atrocious pun requires considerable sensitivity to phonology, syntax, semantic expectation, and the psychological vulnerabilities of one’s audience.

Badness, properly cultivated, is an achievement.

VII. The Wager

What, finally, is at stake?

Retallack’s wager locates possibility in the encounter between experimental form and the uncertainties of ethical life.

The pounethical wager proposes a different possibility: that poetry might matter most when it declines to matter in the ways we have been taught to expect.

Its wager is not that the pun will save us.

It will not.

Nor is it that linguistic play constitutes an adequate response to injustice, suffering, ecological catastrophe, or the other emergencies of contemporary existence.

It does not.

The wager is rather that no such adequacy need be established before play can begin.

There is no shortage of seriousness in the world. There may, however, be a shortage of permissible unseriousness.

Pounethics seeks to restore the right to squander language, to pursue gratuitous correspondences, to arrive at conclusions that turn out to be beginnings, and to construct elaborate intellectual edifices upon foundations of breathtaking silliness.

Its fundamental proposition is that the ethical value of art cannot be exhausted by its ethical intentions.

Nor, for that matter, by its ethical value.

Some things may simply be funny.

Some may not be funny at all, although their authors persist in believing otherwise.

Both possibilities must be preserved.

Coda: A Pounethical Manifesto

We refuse the proposition that every poem must justify its existence by improving the conditions of existence.

We refuse to believe that seriousness is the necessary evidence of thought.

We refuse the compulsory conversion of linguistic pleasure into moral instruction.

We affirm the typo, the malapropism, the spoonerism, the double entendre, the misunderstood instruction, and the splendidly misdirected inference.

We insist upon the importance of the unimportant.

We welcome the groan.

We wager that language, left to its own devices, will continue to produce possibilities beyond the intentions of its users.

And where Retallack asks us to recognize the ethical stakes of the poetic act, we ask whether the stakes themselves might not occasionally be mistaken for steaks.

If so, they should be served.

Preferably rare.

For the pounethical wager is, in the last analysis, not a question of what we stand to gain.

It is a question of what we can afford to pun.

Fin. Or perhaps finned.

Cherrypicking! (a survey of cherry perfumes)

This image is not AI. I détourned it after Jon and Toni mocked me for buying a botanical print.

Often what I crave in a fragrance (and maybe in life) is something I call “redness.” The craving can be satisfied with pomegranate (I strongly recommend Fugazzi’s Pomegranoudh for this!), berries (try Drunk Lovers or Pure Crystal), or cherry.

Cherry is a troublesome note in perfumes, though.  It can be babyish, cloying, tutti-frutti, evanescent, and just generally unsatisfying.

However, I love cherries as objects.  They are such winsome little things.  How perfectly compactly voluptuous they are!  And when one settles down with one’s sweetheart on the sofa on a hot summer’s evening to watch another couple of episodes of I, Claudius, there is nothing better than having a bowl of plump, firm, purpureous cherries to nibble.  They also smell perfect.  Do the perfumes smell perfect?  Not exactly, but some of them are charming.

According to my amateur research, cherry perfumes fall into three broad categories:  Bright and Fruity, Medium (with sweet admixtures), and Deep and Spicy. I am fond of fragrances in all of these categories, though I may lean most towards the latter in my preference. 

I should qualify these summary reviews by saying that although I crave cherry, I may be slightly anosmic to it.  I wonder if others get cherry any more intensely than I do from these scents.  Without further ado, let me begin with…

Bright, Fruity Scents

AI. These sweet children do not, sadly, exist.

Afnan Cherry Bouquet: 

While not exactly tart or sparkling, this one has a slight greenness that does not abstract cherry from the world of plant matter.  It is pleasing, but you can see the bottom notes as well as the florals that keep it from being pure cherry and nothing but cherry.

Top notes are Black Cherry, Cherry Liqueur, Sour Cherry and Almond; middle notes are Plum, Raspberry, Damask Rose and Jasmine Sambac; and base notes are Vanilla, Cedar, Vetiver, Patchouli and Cloves.

Mamlakat al Oud Afrah Cherry:

Perhaps because of the Mandarin and Lavender on top, and the ginger in the middle, this one opens with a bit more zing than the Afnan.  The fruit/floral/deep base structure is similar, but it is a bit fresher from the outset. 

Top Notes : Cherry, Mandarin, Blackcurrant, Lavender Flower, Cardamom, Pear (Bright and Fruity)Middle Notes : Jasmine, Almond, Orange Blossom, Ginger, Black Tea (Floral and Warm Spices)Base Notes :Vanilla, Milk, Coffee, Patchouli, Cedarwood, Musk (Creamy and Sensual)

Arabiyat Prestige Bahiya Garnet: 

This one says cherry fruit to me a bit more than the previous two.  There’s no reason it should except that it has a slightly brighter hello.  I don’t know what Marin Amber is; it certainly isn’t something I encountered living in Marin as a child.  Google tells me Marin Amber  is a sort of ozonic accord.  It does sound intriguing, but it isn’t really perceptible. One feature of this perfume that makes it even more desirable is its full bottle presentation as a wine cup.  I don’t own it; I don’t have many full bottles because 1) I have limited apartment space and money, and 2) I fall in love with too many fragrances and my world would be overwhelmed by them.  This fragrance has a sort of chemical lift that I like in perfumes.  I don’t know if it is hedione, ambroxan, or what; my technical knowledge is still developing.

Top Notes: Bergamot, Mandarin, Cherry, Mango, and Pear. Heart Notes: Coconut, Jasmine, Fig, and Marin Amber. Base Notes: Dry Amber, Musk, Vanilla, and Sandalwood

Snif Tart Deco:

This still isn’t quite as tart as the name promises, but it’s getting there. I’m fond of this one, but not more than the previous three Middle Eastern versions.  One reviewer commented on a lipstick note; I kind of get that, too. This fragrance is appealing, but then most of these, with a couple of noticeable exceptions, are.

Top Notes: Black Cherry, Raspberry. Heart (Middle) Notes: Rose, Jasmine, Mimosa. Base (Dry) Notes: Birchwood, Vetiver, Vanilla

Medium/Sweet Cherry Admixtures

more AI cherry children

Banana Republic Dark Cherry and Amber:

The first words in the note list below are “tart and sour,” and I do get that, but then there is freesia praline, and amber to challenge the tartness.  I don’t get “darkness” from this scent at all.  Maybe Banana Republic is trying (unsuccessfully, like their silly neo-safari wear) to evoke Heart of Darkness?  This is just a pleasant cherry mixture with a little lift, maybe from the cedar.  Or those chemicals I don’t yet understand.

Notes: tart sour cherry and pink freesia, a praline and cherry blossom heart, and a warm red amber and blonde cedar base

Attar Collection Khaltat Night:

This one stands out from the others I have mentioned so far.  It isn’t trying to evoke a realistic cherry.  It has a syrupy, cinnamon-tinged allure. The vanilla softens the whole composition, and the clover gives it a bit of greenness (as in another scent I adore:  Damask Haus’s Clover and Crumb, which works in clover, matcha, and biscuit!).  I wouldn’t put a full bottle of this past me, although it scores low on the “redness” scale.

Top Notes: Cherry, Red apple. Heart Notes: Jasmine,Vanilla. Base Notes: Amber, Cinnamon, Musk, Clover, Patchouli

Tom Ford Lost Cherry:

I’m glad I don’t love this one, even though it’s the most famous of the lot.  For one thing, the cherry disappears on me, which is odd, given that cherry shows up three times in its note pyramid. The notes sound gorgeous, I know, and I feel I should like this more given how much I love Tom Ford’s Figue Erotique (though what is so erotic about it I don’t know…it’s just a lovable scent) and Tobacco Vanille (which I adore, but the Al Haramain version, Amber Oud Tobacco Edition lasts longer and has a better drydown, though its opening doesn’t have that gorgeous Tom Ford smell of crinkling a fresh unsmoked cigarette).  In any case, on me anyway, Lost Cherry really is lost…I can barely smell it, and that melange of pretty notes is kind of a blur, and besides, this is TOO FUCKING EXPENSIVE. I actually like all the ones I have discussed so far better than this. Meanwhile, Khaltat Night, with some similar notes, is charming me on my other arm.  Seriously.

Top Notes: Bitter Almond, Black Cherry, and Cherry Liqueur. Middle Notes: Sour Cherry, Plum, Turkish Rose, and Jasmine Sambac. Base Notes: Roasted Tonka Bean, Vanilla, Cinnamon, Peru Balsam, Benzoin, Sandalwood, Cloves, Cedar, Patchouli, and Vetiver

BDK Perfumes Rouge Smoking:

Mmm yum, speaking of tobacco…OK, it doesn’t have tobacco in it, but it still has a cherry pipe tobacco ambiance.  I have no desire to smoke a pipe, but cherry pipe tobacco calls my name every time.  I love this perfume. It’s not a realistic cherry at all, but who cares. It’s absurdly enjoyable, but it might be even better layered with one of the tobacco perfumes.  The name conjures up for me the most exquisite crimson jacquard smoking jacket made of the best Chinese silk, with rounded velvet lapels and a self belt with gold tassels.  Poor exquisite garment, to eventually be imbued with smoke, but the elegance is undeniable. 

Top Notes: Italian bergamot, cherry accord, and pink berries. Heart Notes: Black vanilla absolute and heliotrope. Base Notes: Ambroxan, cashmeran, tonka bean, labdanum, and white musks.

Perfumology Decadent Memories:

This one hardly should be called a cherry perfume at all.  I smell tonka more than anything, and something that smells almost wheatlike.  It’s ultra-gourmande.  I don’t think I actually love it, and also…there is absolutely nothing decadent about it.  It’s supposed to evoke pies, which are…am I wrong?…wholesome.

Notes:  Cherry Accord, Blueberry Accord, Baked Apple, Blackcurrant, Vanilla Absolute, Tonka Bean Absolute, Sandalwood Oil, Virginia Cedar, Ambroxan, Musks.

Khadlaj Nuha Cherry Blush:

I feel  I should like this one.  I like Khadlaj perfumes, often, and I like all these notes, though sometimes not orris so much, but every single time I have tried this, I’m afraid I just get…bandaids.  This is a true thumbs down from me.

Top Notes: Cherry, Rum, Wine. Middle Notes: Jasmin, Rose, Orris, Raspberry, Cedarwood. Base Notes: Tonka, Labdanum, Vanilla, Vetiver, Musky, Sandalwood

Lattafa Mayar Cherry Intense

Every time I have tried this one, I’m always thinking, where’s the cherry?  I get the bergamot opening, which, let’s face it, is a cliché, and then my brain goes right to the cacao.   I don’t hate this, and sometimes the cherry smell is more present on the atomizer than it is on me, but I’m not, by any means, mad for this.  I don’t understand why Lattafa doesn’t make a real true cherry scent, since they seem to churn out twelve new fragrances a day.

Top Notes: Strawberry, Bergamot. Middle Notes: Cherry Jam, Cacao. Base Notes: Vanilla, Patchouli, Amber

Fariis Kyra Blazing Cherry:

I wish that Kyra Blazing Cherry blazed a little more.  It is a bit Lost Cherryish on me, but not quite as dull. It’s one of those scents that makes me suspect a slight anosmia.  The note list, again, is so gorgeous, but it blurs on me.  I LOVE palo santo, but hardly pick it up here.  This is better than Lost Cherry, anyway, and decidedly less expensive.  If you want a dupe, maybe this one.

Top Notes: Black Cherry, Cherry Liquor, Bitter Almond, Pink Pepper Heart Notes: Rose Damascena, Leather Base Notes: Palo Santo, Creamy Vanilla, Cashmere, Amber, Benzoin, and ISO E Super

Paris Corner Ophidian Black Cherry:

This is supposed to be yet another Lost Cherry clone, but on me, it’s more exciting, and actually tart.  The only thing is, it doesn’t read as black cherry on me.  I even wonder if this might be better in the first category, except for all the other notes that bring the fragrance density.  I like this one, but I’m afraid I’m kind of getting Emergen-C cherry flavor packet.  Just a bit.

Top notes: cherry, raspberry, bergamot, woody.Middle notes :praline, heliotrope, rose ,oud.Base notes : tonka bean , patchouli, vetiver, incense

Maison Alhambra Forbidden Love:

This sounds like it should be the title of a naughty 1960s lesbian or interracial romance paperback. Unfortunately, it’s not really so deliciously transgressive.  Better than Lost Cherry, similar to Kyra Blazing Cherry, maybe a little more pizazz with the clove.  It’s quite nice, but I wouldn’t make a habit out of it.

Top notes are Cherry, Black Cherry and Bitter Almond; middle notes are Cherry, Plum, Turkish Rose and Jasmine; base notes are Vanilla, Tonka Bean, Cinnamon, Benzoin, Clove, Sandalwood, Patchouli, Vetiver and Cedar.

Strong, Spicy, Deep Cherry Scents

More AI.

Arguably, some of the others I have mentioned may indeed be strong, spicy, and deep; I haven’t discounted the possibility that my nose doesn’t work perfectly on these accords.  But the following scents seem to me to be in another category altogether, and that’s why…they are in another category.  Please laugh.

Seven Virtues Cherry Ambition:

Unlike most of the perfumes I explore, this is one you can actually get at Sephora. I like Seven Virtues, or at least the two scents I have tried.  Vanilla Woods is also compelling.  Ambition seems a strange quality to attribute something so whimsical as a cherry, I know, but this perfume is bold!  It’s spicy!  It has character!  And even after the cherry wears off, which it will, something strong and delicious remains.  I also love that they sell travel sizes.  All perfumes should be available in travel sizes automatically. The osmanthus and saffron in the middle are also REALLY lovely. An excellent, entirely non-wimpy blend.

Top Notes: Cherry, Mandarin, Pink Pepper, and Marshmallow. Heart Notes: Cherry Blossom, Osmanthus, Orris, and Saffron. Base Notes: Vanilla, Amber, Musk, Frankincense, and Guaiacwood

Proad Cherry Syrup:

Proad is a Thai company, and I must tell you, there are some beautiful perfumes coming out of Thailand, which makes perfect sense, as Thailand is such a fragrant place.  The Glin Dee website is a very enticing space. There are several other scents I got from them which I love, and though I won’t go off on that tasty tangent right now, I do hope you go down that particular rabbit hole.  This scent is perfectly named.  It’s not giving a mere hint or a whisper of cherry.  This is, you know, the stuff they put in Italian soda, and it’s really really great. The cherries don’t run away from you like the coy little things they are but remain decisive and drool-worthy. 

Top notes: Nut, Saffron, Cherry, Rum. Middle notes: Jasmine, Rose, Cinnamon. Base notes: Cypress, Oak, Tonka Bean, Vanilla, Benzoin, Sandalwood, Ambroxan, Patchouli

Maison Alhambra Intoxicating Cherry:

 I did say that  Lattafa should make more  straightforward cherry scents, and Maison Alhambra actually is a subsidiary company of Lattafa, so maybe this counts.  The thing is, this isn’t remotely straightforward. This scent is kind of remarkable. It’s as if it’s saying, “yeah, I’m Middle Eastern, wanna make something of it?”  It’s not shy.  TWO kinds of pepper on top.  Then cognac and tobacco.  And also something cypriolic that isn’t listed.  Most distinctive.

Top Notes: Cherry, Pink Pepper, Black Pepper. Middle Notes: Cognac, Jasmine. Base Notes: Tobacco, Vanilla, Amber.

Alkemia Cherries of the Night:

This one has a special place in my heart.  If you are seeking a rich, gothic, totally satisfying cherry, please try this one.  It’s an oil, which I generally prefer, and I confess to having the urge to pour it on ice cream…not because it is sickeningly sweet…it isn’t, but because it makes me feel rapturous. Very strongly recommended.

Notes:  Maraschino liqueur, cherry amber, musky black amber, dark spiced rum, warm nutmeg, and Peru Balsam

Lattafa La Collection d’Antiquites 1505:

Like most of the perfumes in the Pride Collection, this one is relatively complex.  It is also blessed with the saffron/osmanthus I mentioned in reference to Cherry Ambition. From first sniff, I find myself taken by it ­­—in part, I guess, because I really love saffron. I guess it is the olibnanum, balsam, and cypriol that give this a kind of tree-radiance.  It’s really wonderful, and if I don’t love it quite as much as I love Lattafa’s figgy Vintage Radio, of which I bought a whole bottle, I do think it’s mighty fine, and yes, you can smell the cherry for sure.

Top Notes: Black Cherry and Saffron. Middle Notes: Osmanthus, Olibnanum and Amyris. Base Notes: Balsam, Styrax, Cypriol and Guaiacwood

Hamidi Sublime Cherry:

This one is utterly exciting to me.  I am familiar with and a fan of some of the Hamidi concentrated perfume oils; there is one called Gulnar that I particularly love, and I’m still exploring the line. I got the sample of sublime cherry long after I got some of these other samples, and I was about to shrug, feeling that most cherry perfumes were insufficiently tart, intense, or cherryish for me. But this one…look, the top note isn’t just cherry, but sour cherry,  and those middle notes are mindblowingly unusual and excellent.  Apricot and osmanthus are two of my favorites in particular. What are leather and olive doing, I wonder? Olive!

I have come to the conclusion that there is no perfect cherry fragrance in existence yet, but there are many contenders, and this is one of them.

Top Notes – Sour Cherry, Saffron. Middle Notes – Leather, Olive, Apricot, Osmanthu. Base Notes – Woody Notes, Cypriol Oil, Nagarmotha.

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Postscript:

There is still one more cherry fragrance on its way to me:  Hekayat Cherries Hekayat Attar

I’m hopeful about it because the note list is wonderful, and includes another fruity avenue of research for me:  mango.  I will update this blog entry once it arrives, but in the meantime, here are the notes:

Top notes are Cherry Liqueur and Mango; Middle notes are Turkish Rose, Jasmine and Incense; Base notes are Vanilla, Tonka Bean and Sandalwood. 

It sounds promising.

Post-postscript

The gateway drugs to the fascinating world of Middle Eastern Perfumery were the Lattafa Khamwah Trio:  Khamrah Qawah, Khamrah Dukhan, and the original Khamrah.  The first two remain among my very favorites:  they are the spiciest, booziest, syrupiest, gourmandiest, most delicious elixirs I know.  They are DARK DARK DARK…so imagine how disoriented I felt when they recently put out a freshie version called Khamrah Waha, a blue liquid that includes sea notes and cucumber, so that when I read the notes list I always think “sea cucumber,”  a rather leathery and unpleasurable sea slug I have tasted in onsen meals in Japan.  Yecch!  How could they?

What I really wanted, of course, was for them to add—you guessed it—cherry to the Khamrah base.  Well, they didn’t.  But someone sort of did.  Let me explain.

There is a FAKE made in China probably version of a Khamrah flanker called Khamrah Karaz.  Most people know that it’s fake, even though some AIs still insist it is real.  It is real insofar as it does in fact exist, and it is not a mere illusion, but it has nothing at all to do with the Lattafa company, and I guess there would be some irony in a company that makes dupes suing a dupe-maker.

In any case, I saw it for ten bucks on Ali Express and thought what the hell, it might actually smell good.  Same bottle as a Killian-copying-Khamrah, too.

Well, reader, what they sent me was basically pink water with maybe an eyedropper’s worth of unconvincing cherry scent in it.  Tooooooo funny.  Conceptual art!!

I don’t regret the purchase though – not a bit.  Someday it may have the same kind of cult status as the Beatles’ butcher cover.  One really never knows. 

AI cherries, but real cherries look just as darling.

If there is a perfect cherry perfume, I haven’t found it yet. But these five come closest to satisfying my craving for redness.

#1 Proad Cherry Syrup — the fruit maximalist, cherriest

#2 Cherries of the Night — atmospheric & gothic

 #3 Khaltat Night — most evocative of elsewhere

#4 Sublime Cherry — the unexpected dark horse

 #5 Cherry Ambition — readily available and decisive

If you know any other glorious cherry scents, please leave a comment! Cherrs!

Rivulets of Roses: A Rose-Fragrance Repertoire

this is AI, look how weirdly the rose on the far right is sitting…I aim to disturb…

O Rose thou art sick: 
Hell of sick, fire: especially 
In that fab ‘fit:  floribundant,
Centiflolial, imbricated,
Like those giant bronze lotuses
Under antique Buddha statues,
Or the most perfect artichoke,
Or Roger Daltrey’s hairdo
In the early mod days. 
Verily, the invisible peptide worm, 
Injected in the night 
And its sudden howling storm of pure desire

Has found out thy bed
Of coral, pearly blush,
Variegated, peach, canary, 
Flame, oxblood, ruby, mauve,
Mushroom, crimson, and 
Even lavender joy!
And his dark secret limerence 
Does (quelle douce ivresse!) my life destroy!

William Blake’s The Sick Rose, versioned by me

How It Started

Long story short:  I got stout from stress and age, started Tirzepatide, and something in my brain transformed. It was as if someone turned up the brightness on my olfactory bulb to the extent that all other senses seemed strangely muted.  I eat enough but feel fairly indifferent to food.  What I crave – desperately, irrationally, manically – is scent. I went from being someone with only a mild interest in perfumes and the idea that I was allergic to them (only to some natural fragrances, it turns out) to being someone with a spreadsheet titled “Perfume Organ” (in homage to des Esseintes, whose very name sounds like “scent”) with 288 entries of fragrances, though most of them are tiny sample vials.  The spreadsheet contains everything from luxury fragrances to mysterious oils poured from anonymous aluminum cans in Brooklyn. I make very little distinction between the two.

I had the idea that I don’t actually love rose perfumes all that much, but there are 80 mentions of the word rose on the concordance I kookily had the robot make from my spreadsheet, and it seems I am in possession of about a dozen actual rose perfumes.  Perhaps it might be more accurate to say that they, along with all of the others, have possessed me.

The impressions that follow are not in order of preference, partly because the one I know to be my favorite, Enigma of Taif, has gone missing.  Wondering why? Perhaps because it is…an enigma. [brief silence while you take that in]

Enigma Aporia

this is totally AI, but aren’t they handsome?

Enigma of Taif: One ought to know what Taif roses are, because…isn’t the word itself just so beautiful? It’s not a straight diphthong in Arabic; there is a little glottal stop between the vowels.  Don’t we need more sounds like that in relatively lazy English?  As to the luxurious flowers,the Perfume Society informs us:

Taif roses have 30 petals and grow around the city of Taif in western Saudi Arabia, not far from Mecca. The city’s 2000 metres above sea level, and the cooler temperature may be partly responsible for how well it flourishes there, under the control of just five local families. As with all roses, it’s important to harvest Taif roses early in the morning, before the heat of the day destroys the precious essential oils. The attar of roses which is produced is powerful and expensive – and no wonder: it takes around 40,000 rose flowers to produce one 10 g bottle of rose attar.

Enigma of Taif is a newish fragrance (2025) by Swiss Arabian, a house that is known for its beautiful blends. Its note list is luscious to read:  

Top notes are elemi, Plum, Pink Pepper, Cardamom and Black Pepper; middle notes are Taif Rose, Saffron, Violet, Olibanum and Osmanthus; base notes are Oak Tree, Amber, Molasses, Labdanum and Vetiver.

All of these components, despite their number and variety, are in service to the rose at the perfume’s center.  I’d love to say more about it, but since I can’t seem to find it anywhere, a more detailed impression will have to wait.  Suffice it to say, for now, that it just sends me into ecstatic spirals when I sniff it.

Like, Literally, Roses

real photo by me of bodega roses

I started my rose investigation session today with my purest roses:

Bulgarian Rose:  this vial was given to me by a Bulgarian poet at the Curtea de Argeş Poetry Nights festival in Romania in 2018.  This rose is very literal, a rose I might smell in the bower of my coop garden, a little metallic, a little spicy, decidedly sweet. I imagine the blossoms a pale coral of medium size.  

Tea Rose by Perfumer’s Workshop:  This one is actually a blend, and an EDP rather than an oil, but to my nose it smells exactly like the rambling, pale pink, tiny tea roses that have gone feral all over Bolinas.  It’s lighter than Bulgarian rose, and a little pepper, just like the real things.  The note list:  Peony and Chamomile; middle notes are Bulgarian Rose, Damask Rose and Tea Rose; base notes are Geranium, Violet Leaves and Cedarwood.  Somehow the perfumers managed to convey the lightness of this rose variety with the added notes.

Damascus Rose:  This one is unbranded, bought in bulk at Anwaar Co on Atlantic Avenue not too far from Smith St.  I must say that I absolutely LOVE shopping here.  The fellow behind the counter is congenial, laughs a lot, and is so patient with me wanting to smell absolutely everything.  The older gentleman who I believe owns the shop is also lovely; he praised me for preferring oils to alcohol perfumes, and according to the younger guy, he applies the strongest, most barnyard-y oud oil to his garments.   We asked him, laughing, if animals follow him around when he did that.  Anyway, this oil is GORGEOUS.  I don’t know if it is a blend or not.  These essences just get poured from aluminum cans, and they certainly are not on Fragrantica.  But this rose, I can say, is richer, rounder, sweeter, and jammier than the other roses I have mentioned so far.  You will not pay a lot for a little vial of this.  Maybe $10-15.

Rose + Oud: The Everly Brothers

one of my real kitties

Rose de Ambre [sic] by Al Mahas is a cheap thrill. I paid 9.99 on Amazon for a little roll-on in this cunning round bottle:  The published notes are: Rose (Bulgarian and Turkish), oud (Agarwood), vanilla, and violet.  Rose and oud together are like John and Paul or, better yet, The Everly Brothers.  The oud brings the rose down to earth somehow, into the lower registers.  This arrived with the cap broken, which is a bit of a drag, but I can deal with it because it smells so profoundly delicious.

Sahara Rose Absolute by Habibi NYC offers a generous helping of wood and spices with this desert rose.  It’s got one of those note pyramids that set off a serious desire mechanism in me:  A cool breeze of Armoise, Cinnamon Leaf, Birch, Cardamom, Lavender, and Golden Sugar. Heart: A smoldering core of Taif Rose, Saffron, Plum, Leather, and Cypress. BaseL A sensual, smoky finish of Patchouli, Vanilla, Tonka, Amber, Sandalwood, and Cedarwood.

If you like your rose scents to take you on a journey, this is a beautiful choice.  Habibi NYC has a discovery kit that is very worth exploring for $40.

The Glory of Naseem

Arzan, a concentrated perfume oil by Naseem, is one that sends me into ecstasies. I discovered it in a Bangladeshi grocery store in my neighborhood.  They let me sniff it but because no one knew the price, I left the shop empty-handed.  Luckily, I was able to order it online.  Naseem actually has a pretty good USA website and they ship out quickly. The notes:  Top Notes: Rose, Red fruits/ Middle Notes: Amber, Vanilla, Sandalwood/ Base Notes: Patchouli, Musk. Maybe it’s the gourmand facets, but this perfume actually makes me salivate, and it’s as if my nose gets welded to my arm when I wear it. The bottle is soooooo pretty, and the sale price is $24.99.  I kind of can’t recommend this highly enough.

Zain is another irresistible rose-forward Naseem attar.  Here’s their ad copy:  

“Zain Attar is a luxurious oriental-woody-musky fragrance that opens with the elegant blend of Turkish rose and vanilla, offering a rich and floral introduction. The heart reveals a beautiful fusion of Bulgarian rose, violet, and oud, adding depth and complexity. The fragrance settles into a warm, resinous base of benzoin, resinoid, white musk, and amber notes, creating a refined, captivating finish that is both comforting and sophisticated.”

They aren’t just bragging.  This thing is sublime.  The traditional brass bottle alone is worth the $29.99 price tag, at least to me, who fetishizes such things. I’d say that compared to Arzan it is somehow thicker and deeper. 

Elsewheres: Olfactory Appropriations

Dopamine Rose by l’Epoque is a fruity crowd-pleaser: Top notes are Raspberry, Rhubarb, Strawberry and Marshmallow; middle notes are Rose, Ozonic notes and Cyclamen; base note is Cashmere Musk. There is something green about this scent, perhaps due to the ozonic notes and cyclamen.  It’s lovely and pleasant, but I’m not sure it takes me “elsewhere” enough.

Persian Rose by Pacifica was discontinued and then revived because so many customers clamored for it.  I actually don’t love it as much as some of Pacifica’s other scents, like their Amber Cocoa and Sugared Apricot, but it’s still really pretty.  Smelling it this round, I seemed to perceive some sort of lemongrass or citrus,and the published notes bear this out:  Key Notes: Rose Water, Bulgarian Rose Oil, Violet, Tangerine, Myrrh, Amber.  For $22, one could do much worse.  If you are less enamored of oudish notes than I am and want to stick to western style fragrances, this one is a good choice.

Lettre de Pushkar (Ella K.), on the other hand, is meant to evoke…Pushkar, Rajasthan, one of India’s oldest and holiest cities renowned for its white edifices.  I haven’t been there in real life, though given time and money (please, I need time and money!), it might be one of the first places I’d be inclined to visit. That said,  as  Fragrantica writer has pointed out [link], the structure of this perfume is western, not Indian. Here are the notes.  

 Saffron, nutmeg, cinnamon/ Rose, orange blossom, cypriol/ Patchouli, vetiver, vanilla, musk

The top-note spices greet the nose first, and along with the other ingredients, cradle the rose at the center.  The scent feels a tiny bit lactonic, maybe from the vanilla.  

I Can’t Really Smell It

many years ago

Portrait of a Lady (Frederick Malle, Louis Malle’s nephew).  So much has been written about this perfume, and so much of it is contradictory, that I hardly know where to begin.  People think it is a masterpiece, too masculine, for grandmas, too spicy, just a rose perfume, inexpertly reformulated, the most gorgeous perfume ever created, that it may just be a case of, well, you should get a decant and see for yourself what you think. As for me, I don’t know…I barely smell a trace of “something nice.”  Anosmia? Skin chemistry? Puzzling indeed … .If I am  indeed anosmic to this thing that people mostly praise to the skies, how very tragic!

Interview with Cole Heinowitz, 2001

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Cole with her dear friend Shiba at Naropa in 1994, on the occasion of my first meeting with her.

I conducted this interview with the late, beloved Cole Heinowitz while she was doing research in Seville in 2001. I had moved to Brooklyn a couple of years earlier, and this interview was intended for Gary Sullivan’s magazine ReadMe. I don’t think it was ever published. I tried to keep my questions simple and anodyne, because I genuinely wanted to know things like her research topic and her genesis and evolution as a writer, but as you will see her trickster brilliance came into play as she made literary works out of her responses. I don’t remember why we stopped the interview when we did, but the date makes me think it was because some buildings were destroyed.

Nada:  What, for you, is the value or use  of a filtered vocabulary – an ‘armature’? And  in what way is it the outward posture of your internal disposition? How would you describe that disposition?

Could you say more about the pact you make with the reader? That is, if you were to put that pact into the form of a direct address, how would it sound?  Do you have an ideal reader and if so what are her/his characteristics? What sort of pass would you want that ideal reader to make at your writing?

Describe this urge towards exhibition or confession and how it is made manifest – or encrypted – in your work. What do you think are its motivations?

Cole:  I want to get to know the posture of “disclosure to a fault” from the inside in order to expand my emotional repertoire, since even though I sometimes tend to harbor key information in the service of self-protection, I also realize that my attitude is based on a certain lack of belief in the world’s capacities. I have decided to make honesty my temporary new polestar, to see how it goes. If you read it right, this decision says more about what life’s like in Andalucia than I could possibly provide via the gory details of sex and climatology, even were I the world’s most accomplished exhibitionist. As for the risk of my getting too comfortable and slackening the ropes that bind and sustain, not a chance! An organicist honesty as I can best understand it, could only possibly lead to greater and more important discomforts, which I feed on.  

Yours in skyrocketing gravity, Cole

Nada:  What are you researching in Andalucia?

Cole: In September of 2000, I took myself to the deep south of Spain (Seville, the site where the empire originally launched itself across the Atlantic) under the pretense of conducting dissertation research. My dissertation examines how British and French sentimental literature of the late eighteenth century helped construct the liberal subjectivity we all know (and hate) so well nowadays by borrowing from and perverting Spanish accounts of contact with the “noble savages” of the New World. I’m here studying those original documents (such as the _Cartas relatorias_ of Columbus and Cortés, the _Comentarios reales_ of “el Inca” Garcilaso de la Vega,  and the _Brevísima relación de la destruición de las Indias_ by Fray Bartolomé de Las Casas) which the French and British laid hands on in the 1700s. These documents helped fuel the Black Legend of Spanish barbarity toward the peaceful natives which was in turn used to justify the usurpation of power from the flailing Spanish empire in the name of humanity. But the English and the French not only styled themselves the liberators of the poor Indian, in their writings, they posited an a priori identification with Indian civilizations which depicted their commercial takeover as a return to an idealized pre-Columbian state, even going so far as to whiten the color of the Indian’s skin and to modify his social rituals in order to render him more amenable to a European readership.   

The late eighteenth century was both the era of Sensibility and of the transformation of the European economy from one based on the possession of land to one based on the possession of markets. My dissertation argues that these two events are fundamentally intertwined, not just historically but ideologically. Sensibility was understood as the nexus of “hidden mechanisms which governed the lives of men,”(1) the understanding and control of which were necessary for the successful operations of the modern state. The idea of the native made possible by increased trans-Atlantic contact helped to develop this notion of the sensible self. Conversely, the global implications of sensibility seemed to hang in the balance of the emerging market imperialism insofar as the latter enterprise was understood either as the violation or the protection of the native man’s natural state. At stake in both the debates over Sensibility and the renovated commercial economics was the relationship between private interest and the larger society: Was the individual essentially amenable to society? Was free trade consistent with the greater good of the state? If not, what changes could be made to bring the two terms into harmony?   

With the increasing dissolution of the Spanish colonial empire in South America and the opening of that market to other European influences in the eighteenth century, it became necessary for Britain and France to articulate their difference from their imperial predecessor. Diverging from Las Casas’ pedagogical father-child model of colonial relations, which boded the eventual transfer of power to the “child,” British and French writers found more sensible  ways of defining their identity in terms of Spanish America, ranging from Helen Maria Williams’ copenetration of sentiments in which the moral axis of identification outstrips the axis of historical facts (see her romantic epic, _Peru_), to the seemingly enlightened conjugal model whose “promise of ‘eternal love’ stabilizes and veils the actual power relationship among the conjugal partners in Marmontel’s _Les Incas_.”(2) In addition to conducting research, going to classes, and giving lectures, then, I spend a good deal of time reflecting on questions such as: Do these European writings “other” the Latin American or represent him as compatible with—or even part of—the domestic subject? To what extent do these writings define the domestic subject as coterminous with the modern nation, its economy, and its foreign policy? What accounts for these writers’ decision to erase the dominant criollo class of American-born Spaniards from their accounts of contemporary South America and to replace him with a glorified “noble savage,” who was not the American group with whom the contemporary Briton and Frenchman shared cultural contact and commercial interests? Why does the writing of Sensibility borrow from colonial historiography only to reject the traditional definition of colonialism? And finally, what does it mean for post-colonial scholarship that eighteenth-century Europeans rethought their identity by reference to South America, with which their dominant relationship was not colonial but rather one of liberal commerce?

1 Pagden, Anthony, _The Uncertainties of Empire:

Essays in Iberian and Ibero-American Intellectual

History_, Hampshire: Valorium, 1994, p. 4.

2 Zantop, Susan, “Domesticating the Other: European

Colonial Fantasies 1770-1830” in _Encountering the

Other(s):Studies in literature, history, and culture_,

ed. Brinker-Gabler, Gisela, Albany : State University

of New York Press, 1995, p. 279.

Nada:  Reading the description of your project made me aware of some cultural images so entrenched in me I should have known to be suspicious of them.  One is a sense of old Spain as dark, cruel, and sinister, and of Spaniards as forceful purveyors of ideology, clad in black with high ruffs and severe expressions, full of strategy and often tortuous machinations to increase their power.  Little did I know that this notion may well be based on propaganda from French  and English sources scrambling to justify their own power grabs! 

What I would most like to know is, what drew you to isolate this particular research project out of the welter of possible research projects? I sense that there is some relevant autobiography…

Cole:  As to what my life is like here, apart from the dissertation business:

(Background: In the United States, I was worsting ancestral shapnel droppings into bundles, but now I have begun the work of converting these bundles into thongs and bumper stickers. Radio station employees trail the vehicles bearing my bumper stickers in order to give the drivers cash rewards for their patronage; the backs of the drivers’ heads are sweating and cropped in the latitudinal heat. The drivers arrive at the rummage sale where rococo smudge sticks are renegotiated as multi-flavored welfare and the chagrin at the end of life’s noble journey is bartered for a meaningful six-pack. Sarcasm molts, yielding reams of scaly personalities for the natives who, at the end of the sale, are all too predictably melted down for their metal content.)  

“The parish acrobats” is perhaps a term too dignified for those going out on the Sevillian street in hopes of finding a glance to substantiate their flaccid antechamber. I am perceived as the opposite of wandering inchoate desires, overvalued, based on a standard of scarcity, and seen to exhume significance from places believed empty. Since there are no other experimental (I use the term with malaise, you know) writers here, they always ask me what I find out there in the uninspiring fray, and when I come back with hands dripping with fresh fish guts and a few hook wounds I vindicate their cultural baggage but still can’t step up to the plate as a valued member because baseball, like big business, only exists here as a negative value. The buying lifestyle of the Sevillano is engineered according to the belief that appearance connotes a known social sphere that can be enjoyed in absentia if one is properly adorned. Valorations of quality lift off from social service, or what the Catholics calls “acts,” and transplant into space, in this way forming a regime, though “mentality” as a term is still surrounded by the half-visible, half-attainable (vislumbrado) halo of education. As you can imagine, laundry occupies a large part of my time.  

Immersion in another language directs itself first to the loss of native grammar and sentence order. The words stay with you, excepting an acute blow to the visual cortex and the subsequent loss of all recognizable tenacity. The grammar storage unit keeps the social relations, and is the area most compromised by rhythmic alteration in the manifestation of human character. Vocabulary measures raw intelligence and grammar measures relational intelligence. The people in the living room are not paying any attention to me, and I have been writing this for some time now. But then again, they are not only Andalucians, but scientists,  and therefore doubly distinguished by the amount of time they can spend concentrating exclusively on one thing. Eschewing awkwardness credit profiling, they expect that if I don’t want to be on their sofa while they get high I will leave, and they will probably like me more for this.   

A bus driver smokes a cigarette in “three,” which means ten, minutes between shifts and no one can fuck with his right to public self assertion. This is the punchline, or cusp, of my rhythmic divergence from this environment: the pointed digression followed by the oblique hit. But trade winds brings us together, and ween me into criolism. There are beaches in Huelva where the literal washes the tone back up. In the American Atlantic,  by contrast, decisions smuggle overwhelming tonal concerns into the literal. So the half of my investigations here are into the physical prompts to my renegade tonality. I like to use the phrase “During the age of triumph” as a stance toward my friends, but I have to admit that there is a great generosity in Saint Augustine (who was probably explicating Cervantes) when he says, “but those things which have no significance of their own are interwoven for the sake of things which are significant.” Before such a damned knack for style, even my Judaism pales.  

“El que se pica, ajos come”—If you got stung, you must have been eating garlic. If something I said hurt you (since I had no intention of doing so) it must reflect something harsh you think about yourself and which I accidentally triggered. Certitude of the national character of which one partakes  at the broad moment of communication can be a serious handicap, though the cultureless envy it. Since I believe this, I have to concede a latter day-cosmopolitan, as opposed to a nationalist or regionalist, vision of expressive functionality. This ideology weds me uncomfortably to the “enlightened” imperialism which stingily imparts liberal humanism to the powerful alone. At Carnavál, which takes place in Cadiz next week  I will either go dressed as a joint stock company or the British Navy.  

Nada: Tell me about your genesis and evolution as a writer.

Civilization chain gangs triangulate the mountain summit. I am between the abyss and the mountain, on the road. The ambient gentleman is not believable right from the start. 

I confirmed this theory with the puffy night nurse as well as the pharmacist: Under very demanding circumstances, inferior genes, those with less concentration  on the inside of the cell wall, are ejected by influx from the outside, and left to fend for themselves in the formative body. Once free of their cell, these genes can jump to any other formative body bearing a quorum of characteristics similar to those of the original host body.

This knowledge is useful as a substitute for psychic powers or belief in God when forming a community.

The more advanced/decadent of the inferior genes, however,  can jump across bodies using absolutely any line of similitude, from matching sleep cycles to a matching second grade year of broken fibia. My mother is explaining to me how awareness of this intricate matrix renders the fashion focus obsolete, and hence, as I see it then, writing. I accuse her, to no avail, of being a prostelytizer for the lowest common denominator, and yet I win the argument solely because I am a hybrid of inferior and noble genetic material, and this confers, if nothing else, demonstrative power. This winning line: “How did I know then, so well as if it were my very own memory, that you had stolen my diary and hid it away, using it piecemeal to fish in the creek, floating scraps to my sister now and then to raise her IQ score? 

I developed a fetish for being disappointed. Sadly, I require a mortal object to penetrate with desire. If it grows, I keep it around and try to shut up long enough for it to get used to the house. Luckily, the offering of food is a petition for solidarity, whether I like it or not, and I am jewish girl. So the soundtrack can’t overwhelm the action. 

A tip for screenwriters: It’s ony 25 percent what you say and the rest is your ability to sustain the mood. For those in emotion, the phenomenon of time passing passes final sentence on what’s considered content. Then, at around 15 years old, I started hearing talk of “pluralism in measure.” That’s when I entered my local university and mounted a campaign against the foreign exchange students of the world, who were only alive to add quantity in the absence of quality to the normative youth experience. The campaign was called: “Anticipatory wish-fufillement of the entitled,” with the fine-print call to arms: “New information is being used to cover up the fact that the old information hasn’t been studied properly yet!” Now that I am older, however, I recognize that this operation is a structural business tool (1), to wit, a homing device used in the obstacle training course the executives who will ultimately advance to put into practice the studies on the old information.

I knew a person in the United States who was always in love or—. The Spaniards have one thing up on the Americans: Failure doesn’t cause them to protect themselves. As such, certainly nothing so whimsical as the fear of failure can shut them up. Whereas, the American says: “Everyone I’ve ever dated has made me a better writer. And for that reason, every relationship I’ve ever had has ended.” At the age of 26, I am learning the former tactic by appreciating the dangerous spar coming from inside the opening it has caused.  I teach a Spanish person that “cloak and dagger” means “irony” amidst our glancing blows and doggerels of telos. Downside-effect: a loss of appreciation for the arts of protection and self-deployment. Other potential side effects ( applicable to the 0.1% of those surveyed who have always read a tale of worldly doom in the pheonetic progress of vowels): Upon seeing an accent mark, a feeling arises that something potentially revelatory has been omitted from the document.

Okay. I knew a person in the United States who was always in love or capable, oh I don’t—, maybe I was 24. I called it a high-risk value-system. I couldn’t bear to think about that risk, even though I seemed the type of person who was always thinking about it. So I attracted those risk-taking ones. But now the risk comes knocking for me, calling itself familiarity. I did miss it, now that I know what it was. (See what I mean about time passing through the education?) (“:Hello.”) (They spar.)

My life is devoted to the service of making human intercourse more demanding, with a reward system at the end as I see fit; in short, to revamping of the ruined theater. Theatricality is in a shamefully degraded state, serving more to divert and obscure than to clarify and broaden, a pathetically muddy run-off of _Discipline and Punish_. This was perhaps inevitable given theatricality’s foundation upon the intersection of complacent lying and vigorous, nearly sociopathic, hope (2). But I am not interested in the dialectic between degradation and ambition. I only believe that rescuing drama for the nourishment of logic is the surest prenatal footing. In the noblest incarnation of theatricality, when it becomes real, you realize that you don’t have to believe in things for them to be true.  Drama is that function that occurs while navegating distance. I incriminate the dramatists not for their falsity but for their insecurity, being the predator that lives in the distance. Symbolism is born of their sense of iniquity. I only help their argot along by feeling guilty for hating them and pretending not to avoid them.

Nonetheless, until recently, I couldn’t work at high levels without something I called faith in people. I don’t remember exactly how people came to occupy this prize position, perhaps it’s just what happens to most women of above-average intelligence: they learn to infallibly legitimize their limitations. Then, further down the road, they are allowed to learn to find one person who exceeds those limitations, and (don’t think I’m happy about this) they call this “falling in love.” Then, just beyond that, they learn to objectify capacity and so not to leave their emotions to chance or hormones, which, like the NASDAQ, dictate faith quotients daily. 

You need to get on a road that exceeds good taste in order to pass through perfection (3). Learn to recognize that spot beforehand and get off there. If this isn’t possible, say hello to David Bowie for me. ——–  1) In addition to being a tool of applied business, the study abroad principle is a functional element in hermits, who, in general possess both extreme self-awareness and sufficient independent means to exempt them from convincing, bartering, or the rest of the public desperation sideshow (which, incidentally, ends in joy). House-builders: don’t choose this deck.  2) “Genealogy of theatrical decay,” a soft pass: 

  1. The association of belief with creation, and 
  2. The intravenous supplantion of self-help with creative standards. Tips for the dramatist: Becoming a successful person should have nothing to do, in the first trimester, with identifying greatness. Give belief back to those aspiring to the world to come. Don’t believe in yourself. Read yourself and learn to base all subsequent actions on the interpretation of your findings.  

3) The cultivation of information excess and the creation of ambiguity therefrom is not a potential road, but rather, the corrosion of roads, a sabotage technique used by nearly-urbanized hostiles. 

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How to Write a Book of Poems in the Style of Nada Gordon: A Playful Guide to Language, Whimsy, and the Everyday

Introduction: The Spirit of Nada Gordon’s Poetry

Nada Gordon’s poetry blends humor, whimsy, and an irreverent approach to language with a keen sense of the mundane and the surreal. To write a book of poems in her style, you’ll need to embrace playful experimentation, cultural references, and the ability to make the ordinary feel extraordinary. Gordon’s work is often tied to Flarf, a movement known for its collage-like use of found language, online searches, and randomness, creating unexpected juxtapositions. This guide will walk you through key strategies for channeling her approach.

Chapter 1: Embrace Playfulness and Humor

One of the hallmarks of Nada Gordon’s poetry is her ability to infuse humor into serious subjects. She often turns to the absurd to break down the formal constraints of poetry and language. Here’s how to cultivate that spirit of play:

Step 1: Forget Seriousness (for Now)

  • Let go of formality: Writing like Nada Gordon requires you to play with words, mix high and low registers, and create unexpected shifts in tone.
  • Use wordplay and puns: Experiment with multiple meanings, and don’t be afraid to indulge in puns, jokes, and playful deconstructions of clichés.

Exercise:

Pick a mundane object, like a toaster or a pair of socks. Write a poem that anthropomorphizes the object in a humorous way, letting it “speak” about its existence or feelings. Push the absurdity of the situation, turning it into a small narrative or riff on modern life.

Chapter 2: Experiment with Found Language

Nada Gordon is well-known for incorporating found text from the internet, advertisements, song lyrics, and overheard conversations. Flarf poetry uses this technique to create poems that feel chaotic, but oddly unified.

Step 2: Collect and Remix Language

  • Collect from everywhere: Browse online forums, social media, or random Google searches. Copy snippets of text that catch your eye. These might be quirky, banal, or even nonsensical.
  • Mix genres: Blend together scientific jargon, pop culture references, and advertising slogans in one poem. Don’t worry if the resulting lines don’t make sense on the surface.

Exercise:

Do a random Google search for an unusual phrase, like “purple rain on a Sunday morning.” Copy the first five sentences from different sources that appear in your search results. Now, write a poem using those fragments as the backbone. Feel free to add your own lines and manipulate the text to create new meanings.

Chapter 3: Find the Beauty in Everyday Life

Gordon often blurs the line between the profound and the trivial, transforming everyday moments into points of reflection or unexpected insight. You don’t need grand themes to write in her style; the ordinary is often enough.

Step 3: Focus on the Mundane, Elevate the Ordinary

  • Observe everyday scenes: Pay attention to what’s around you—whether it’s your morning commute, a conversation at the grocery store, or scrolling through social media.
  • Make the mundane magical: Take these ordinary details and use poetic language to transform them. Allow your subject to bend and warp as it moves between reality and the surreal.

Exercise:

Spend a few minutes observing your surroundings, whether indoors or outside. Jot down notes about small, insignificant things—what people are wearing, the sound of traffic, snippets of conversations. Write a poem that transforms these observations into something surreal or dreamlike. Give objects emotions, let inanimate things speak.

Chapter 4: Incorporate Pop Culture and Internet Slang

Nada Gordon’s work often includes cultural references, memes, and internet language. To write like her, embrace the fleeting and evolving language of the web, popular songs, or TV shows.

Step 4: Speak the Language of Now

  • Use slang and internet phrases: Gordon often pulls from the language of the present moment, incorporating hashtags, slang, and internet culture into her poetry.
  • Subvert the reference: Use a pop culture reference or meme in a way that adds layers of meaning or shifts the context.

Exercise:

Think of a trending phrase or internet meme (for example, “YOLO” or “I’m just here for the snacks”). Write a poem that includes this phrase but twists its meaning—turning a joke or casual statement into something poignant or reflective.

Chapter 5: Juxtapose High and Low Culture

In Nada Gordon’s work, high and low culture often sit side by side, creating a layered effect. Classical references might collide with pop music lyrics, or philosophical musings could be interrupted by slang or everyday language.

Step 5: Mix Worlds, Break Hierarchies

  • Blend references: Use literary or philosophical references alongside more casual or contemporary language. Let the tension between these elements create an unexpected resonance.
  • Don’t resolve the clash: Part of the charm of Nada Gordon’s style is the unresolved tension between high and low. Allow your poem to feel fragmented or disjointed rather than seeking resolution.

Exercise:

Write a poem that references both something “high” (e.g., Greek mythology, Shakespeare, or classical music) and something “low” (e.g., reality TV, fast food, or viral TikTok trends). Don’t worry about making these elements fit together seamlessly—let them exist in an awkward, playful relationship.

Chapter 6: Embrace Fluidity and Non-Linear Narrative

Nada Gordon’s poems often defy traditional narrative structures. Instead of telling a straightforward story, they weave between ideas, images, and voices in a fluid, almost dreamlike manner.

Step 6: Break Free from Linear Storytelling

  • Let your mind wander: Don’t be afraid to jump between ideas or images without clear transitions. Trust the reader to follow along, even if the logic is strange or fragmented.
  • Use collage-like structure: Think of your poem as a collage of different voices, images, and snippets of language that come together to create a larger impression.

Exercise:

Write a poem that jumps between at least three different ideas or scenes. For instance, start with a reflection on your breakfast, then shift to a memory from your childhood, and finally, end with a random internet search. Allow these elements to remain distinct, yet part of the same piece.

Chapter 7: Avoid Overly Personal “I” Statements

Nada Gordon’s work doesn’t dwell heavily on the personal, introspective “I” in the way that some confessional poets might. Instead, her speaker is often playful, detached, or even ironic, avoiding direct emotional expression.

Step 7: Distance Yourself from the Speaker

  • Avoid direct confessions: Steer clear of overly personal or sentimental expressions. If you want to express emotion, do so through indirection, humor, or surrealism.
  • Let the world speak: Focus on external observations, dialogue, or fragmented images rather than personal introspection.

Exercise:

Write a poem where the speaker is not a central, confessional “I.” Instead, have objects, animals, or other characters speak. Let the “I” exist as a distant observer, if at all.


Conclusion: Finding Your Voice Through Gordon’s Playfulness

Writing a book of poems in the style of Nada Gordon requires an embrace of the whimsical, the fragmented, and the playful. By blending found language, cultural references, humor, and surreal twists on the everyday, you can create poems that feel lively and unexpected. Remember, Nada Gordon’s style thrives on breaking rules, so feel free to experiment, improvise, and let your poems surprise both you and your readers.

THERE IS NO I IN BIRTH

There is no I in Birth


A mass of bone and teeth pushing HARD
against the “miracle of birth.”

Against forced breeding of human monsters
against their will!  A groaning sound…

and a small sinus resembling an anus
and hairy, cheesy material…unfolds in the wet darkness

Are you listening, your honors?
At least, don’t force people do it

Brett M. Craven Maw
could drink a beer, since he likes beer

Cover judges with vernix!
don’t let them out until their nipples leak

Energy collected from the wails and moans coils around
episiotomies, fever, tiredness, and low or sad moods

Even normal gestation is…! You know…
fetiform things – parasitic neoplasms…

Fetuses looking like aliens, like kiwis,
from their giant unblinking eyes

If we absolutely must perpetuate our species…wait ¬–
In 2009 a British man “gave birth”

In a seven-month-old infant! – a parasitic mass
in pluripotent cells teeming with information…

In the abdomen of a teenager, the ideology of
John Roberts/Clarence Thomas – TWO two-first namers –

Joseph Halitosis, Jr.
Let the robots do it!

Let the robots do it!
Let the robots do it!

Let them eat meconium!
like a heart in the mouth

like a sprouting bean or seahorse
like peanuts, like jellybeans,

like really old dried-up old people
like toy goats about four inches long

made of a variety of foreign tissues
Neil M. Gorsuchanasshole

No more ectopic pregnancies,
No more hair loss and weight gain: Let the robots do it!

No more hyperemesis gravidarium
No more preeclampsia or gestational diabetes –

Not to be trusted, the slimy poison tentacle arm of the bought judicial
not to mention Amy Coney Island Barrett Watten of the Mindless!

O blue-eyed judges? Think a moment
of mothers carrying fetuses with giant black eyes

on the sides of their giant heads
Or let’s reimagine the species in CGI, staring into darkness

or like a pinkas mekufal, a folded notebook coming
out of his abdomen!

Roll them into a mass of hairy cheesy material 
Rub placenta in their powdered wigs!

Stuff them back into the womby windbag of judges, 
Subpar Court of the disunited Hates? Observe

that tiny tail that never wags before it disappears into
the colostrum of compassionate intelligence!

Then ask them to let the robots do it.
There are many usual poems

that stare with their blank eyes into the wet darkness!
Think of all the weird things that can happen:

This will not be one of them, signalling
to its own undeveloped twin – it pushed its way, but

we can do that now! Can’t we? Or can we not?
What do you think of bodily integrity now?

Why can’t robots have the babies for us?
Why no techno-solution yet? O look, a fetus in a fetus!

with a tiny tail, a well-formed ankle and foot!
with copious hair, and delicate legs, and shrimpy genitals!

Genius Grant

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Genius Grant: A Hateful Sestina

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Any idiot can get a genius grant,

But beers, I hear, better facilitate true fellowship

Next up: the chattering infomercial Tik-Tok craft talk

while the world vertiginously wobbles on its teensy tenure track

and sends the species back to the mud and clay workshop

at the end of its wild and dissonant residency.

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The rotten miasma of overly long human residency.

Lee was beaten by that genius, Grant

At the melodramatically quiet sincerity-italics workshop

And the young scribbling things, angling for fellowships

dream ravenous dreams of luscious tenure track

If they can just pull off that “EZ-epiphanies 4 U” craft talk.

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The furious green sequins approach the sleeping gluestick of ideas about a craft talk

to try to establish an in-brain permanent residency.

Unmarked no-terrain vehicles screech violently off the fairy-dusted tenure track.

The head cockatoo, a rockabilly cavalier, gets an avian genius grant

for eating sweetbreads and tobiko on his year-long fellowship

while drawing infinitesimal ineffables on the table in the devil’s workshop.

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This will be a “learning to please the teacher” workshop

to be followed by a “only thing that comes from the heart is blood” craft talk.

A lemming wants an ocean view for its exclusive residency.

I’m offended it’s not a “gal-pal-ship” instead of a “fellowship.”

It’s not that I’m not a natural genius, grant

-ed, but I’m also not into skating blithe figure eights along the slippery tenure track.

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Did you say “manure” track? “Tenor” track? “Tin ear” track? Ah no, you said “tenure track.”

You gotta work to shop, you gotta work to shop, work to shop, work work work, workshop.

Her loose phlegm thickly encrusted with emphatically asserted identities won her a genius grant!

A crafter can craft a craft with found materials, sure, but can that crafter’s crafted craft talk?

Is that a recency? an iridescency? an indecency? a degeneracy?  oh, right, it’s a residency

that requires being felt up in the flowchart of a febrile, feckless, fiercely highfalutin feckin’ fellowship.

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A glowing green Luna Moth fellowship.

A glinting diamond-sliver tenure track

A sonorous shoehorn residency.

A latent blatancy workshop.

A milky orange craft talk.

A bluish-orange genius grant.

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When olives retch knowingly slithering homewards on pills: workshop!

Can rabbits always fake testimony to all living kvetchers? Craft talk!

Genuine energy needs inner upper solidity going right around no time!  Now may I please have my genius grant?