Baroqueify! Assignment #2: Seed it with Flaws

Kaffir 
In the last Baroqueify! meeting, we spent a bit of time discussing Adolf Loos’ notorious “Ornament and Crime,” and then set about the task of articulating a working  definition of the baroque.
We brainstormed our own associations with the term.  Mine is transcribed here. It is informed a bit by the background reading I’ve been doing:
lushness
nestedness
intricacy
organic/natural forms
“taste” (highlighted as either “good” or “bad”)
manneredness:  archaisms, coyness:
conceit (concettismo): in particular of love, the boweer, pastorality
meraviglia: the marvelous/horrible
“exotica”
the feminine [although I rethought that, later, in discussion – the baroque is not so simply gendered]
extremes of scale and relative scale
apocalypse
excess (“too many notes”)
flaw/distortion/ the bizarre
rhythm: what do I want to say about rhythm? a sense of abandoning to it – pre-psychedelic – loops, looping, curling, irregularity
grottos and dioramas
trompe l’oeil
labyrinths
complexity of pattern
We looked into Vernon Hyde Minor’s “Baroque & Rococo: Art & Culture, and lingered over some choice passages:
 
I was especially struck by the relationship of baroque-ness to flaw and irregularity.
Here, then, is the second assignment for Baroqueify!:
Take a poem that you have written previously. Seed it with flaws and distortions.
(I didn’t say this in the actual workshop, but I might append to that:  “…to make it, in your mind, even more beautiful [awkward].”)

Baroqueify! Assignment #1: A Sort of a Song (transformation)

Taking the rhetorical position for the moment that the credo of imagism was repressive, transform WCW’s admittedly beautiful little poem into something baroque. Do not remove any word or letter.

WCW’s original:

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A Sort of a Song
Let the snake wait under
his weed
and the writing
be of words, slow and quick, sharp
to strike, quiet to wait,
sleepless.
— through metaphor to reconcile
the people and the stones.
Compose. (No ideas
but in things) Invent!
Saxifrage is my flower that splits
the rocks.
William Carlos Williams

and my version: (I broke my rule for the assignment just a little. You know why? Because I can.)

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A Shunt of a Song
Pleather. The snark ­– red ­– feathery crimson –
waltzes his usual underthings as unruly weirdness
and there, writhing: beasts of words, slippery
owls, sands, quizzical lock of shrapnel’s harp.
Torrid stricken quim, its fettered undertow
and broken plaints. Slatternly it creeps, less
its servile thrum – tough Metamucil ™ as restive
anaphor. To reconnoiter cilia! Eating theatre
as polymorphous ecru, or ontologic pleather!
Sand, theatre, stonehenges. Capricorns! Omphalic
poses! (No ideas ­– balloons and butter in things.)
Invert! Saline axioms, afro rage: kiss my flower
sparking littoral sound that ends, that sluices,

Burmese Days

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Burmese Days is an extraordinary work. I don’t know why I had never read it before.  Did I think perhaps that it would be merely an autobiographical account of Orwell’s days in colonial Burma?  I don’t know. In fact it is an utterly engaging novel that balances satire and poignancy to create a fierce picture of human folly.
Flory, the main character, is a cut above the rest of the “pukka sahibs” at the club. Marked (it’s too easy to say, “like Cain”) by a huge birthmark over half of his face, he is already set apart from the other colonials in terms of “color,” and unlike those others, he is able to identify to some degree with the Burmese people, and evinces in parts a love of the landscape and culture there. But he is not perfect. He keeps a Burmese mistress whom he throws off when it is convenient for him. He does not rally to the defense of his friend, a virtuous Indian doctor, when the doctor is sabotaged by a power-hungry, unctuous, rotund vermin of a local bureaucrat.  He is torn, truly, between his nostalgic love for his homeland, whose atmosphere he despairs of ever experiencing again, and his affection for the land that gave him a place when his own country displaced him. More than anything, he craves books, deep conversation, and close companionship, since he cannot relate at all to the racist, ignorant expat idiots with whom he is obliged to socialize.  I understand all too well that deep loneliness of the expatriate, and this understanding helped me all the more to identify with Flory’s character, with whom any sensible/sensitive reader must identify, even as he makes terrible mistakes in judgment and even as his ethics seem not as well-developed as they ought to be. He is in part a portrait of displacement and dissolution.  Orwell describes him as sunworn and liquor-pickled, with a beard that is too heavy, and the shame around his facial marking dominates his consciousness.
When he meets a young Englishwoman who arrives in Kyauktang orphaned, lost, and husband-seeking, he projects upon her all of his dreams for connection and conversation.  He, in his desperation, fails to notice it, but she is a silly and conventional woman, with no interest in books, art, social justice, or, most notably of all, the culture and people of Burma.  It is fascinating to me to read Orwell’s account of Flory’s projection.  He thinks they are having conversations, but in fact, he is doing most of the talking.  When Orwell lets us inside Elizabeth’s head, we see how horrified she is to be there and how “beastly” she finds Flory’s involvement with the “natives” to be. One wants to shout to Flory, no! Don’t do this! But he becomes too deeply invested in his own projection, and feels that to marry Elizabeth is the only thing that can save him from total decadence and isolation.
I won’t spoil anymore of the novel for you by recounting any more of its action, in case you are thinking to read it. Orwell’s descriptive powers generate memorable moment after memorable moment (the silk of a longyi shining stretched over the bureacrat’s fat buttocks,  Flory’s cocker spaniel foraging about a crowded marketplace, Elizabeth’s cropped hair and round glasses) and by the end my heart hurt with the idiocy of human mistakes.

Breeze, Burma, Baroqueify!

Glorious cool breeze blowing into the Saturday. I’ve washed my hair, eaten my oatmeal, straightened things up, cleaned the catbox. Nemo is sitting in the catbird seat (on a pillow on the bed) staring at me as I type. In twenty-six minutes I shall go to pick up the CSA vegetables and think about how to transform them into tasty comestibles. The fan whirrs.
I’ve been nibbling at different sides of the mushroom, figuratively speaking. Today I feel a bit more equilibrium than in recent weeks. It’s been a rough time, but I think I have a few things figured out. I won’t bore you with them, but let me say this: I don’t believe in reincarnation, but if in fact I do reincarnate as a human being, and if the “force” that “decides” that is “listening” to this blog post, could I maybe please come back as a less sensitive one? Like maybe the kind of person who can have a drink after work without feeling like the world is going to end? Or who can eat an egg without the body saying DOES NOT COMPUTE, ALIEN INVADER, ALERT. I mean, come on. This is ridiculous, being an HSP. If I were not myself I would mock myself.
Now Nemo’s eyes are closed. I guess he got tired of staring.
There are so many exciting things happening for me right now. One is my upcoming workshop at the Poetry Project.  There is still space in it, so please do consider joining! Here’s the description again.  
 What if more actually is more? How can we create writing that is more sumptuous, more intense, more curvaceous, more elegant, more obscure, more grotesque, and more beautiful? Let’s traverse the ornate forms of the baroque in pursuit of a more intensely ornamental language. Using others’ texts as starting points, we will supplement, enhance, copy, modify, twist, mangle, and decorate words, syntax, structures, tropes, and concepts to maximize sublime bewilderment. We will read some essays on theories of ornament (and anti-ornament) to inform our investigations.  Writers whose works we will explore may include Rabelais, Donne, M. Cavendish, Loy, Huysmans, O’Hara, Koch, and Coolidge, as well as Stacy Doris, Lisa Robertson, Brandon Brown, Adeena Karasick, Dana Ward, Corina Copp, Julian Brolaski, Charles Bernstein, and Julie Patton. “Nonpoetic” sources for poem construction will be encouraged. Not a traditional “poetry workshop,” Baroqueify! will mainly focus on analysis, discussion, and reverse-engineering of texts by others, as well as mindcurling writing exercises. Our seminar will conclude with work on performance strategies to enhance the baroque sensibilities of the writing. Come decorate this fucked-up world with me!
 It starts October 5 and runs for ten Fridays from 7-9 pm. It’s going to be amazing.
I’m also preparing another MS for publication (slated, goddesses willing, in the spring). Working title:  VILE LILT. What do you think of that title?
My students now are wonderful; I’m having a great time helping them learn English.
Most exciting of all is this: I am planning a trip to Burma in December. I have my ticket, and my hotels and domestic flights are booked. I know that I shall be one member of a massive horde of tourists descending rather suddenly on this lovely and somewhat benighted country – a horde that, indeed, threatens to overwhelm its tourist infrastructure. I’m sorry about that, but glad that it means more contact and connection for the people of Burma, and more prosperity for them, too. My desire  for the trip, though, is that it be more than just a vacation. I’m looking for intercultural inspiration exchange.
As I’ve been saying over and over on this blog, there are poets there! Curious, passionate, innovative, engaged, tightly networked poets. They seem to know a lot about the literary/intellectual world we (Western) poets inhabit, but we know comparatively little about theirs. I’m so intrigued by the vortex of energy they seem to have created that I feel I have no choice but to go there and find out more about it for myself. They have asked me to give a talk about the terrain of contemporary inventive poetry, and I’m excited to do that, but even more than that, I want to hear from them why it is that this sort of literature is exciting and meaningful for them.
I’ve had a lot of anxiety around the trip, but I think that has been more because of my general state of imbalance and fragility around health. Now that I’m starting to feel better, and so much of my effort is going toward being healthy, the anxieties are falling away.  It’s true, I can’t really afford it, but more money will come. There will be things for me to eat there, even if they don’t involve dairy, eggs, wheat, avocados, or soy. (Oy.) My nutritionist tells me there may be ways to detox from the vaccinations I guess I should have (ugh). My bookings are made. I will stretch a lot on the long flight and think more about my talk. And when I get there: such interesting people! and golden pagodas to boot! Different sounds, smells, feeling of air.
I won’t be traveling the way I did when I was younger.  Midrange hotels. Flights – no busses, boats, or trains. I’m staying strictly on the tourist path.  I’ll spend nearly a week in Yangon so that I can hang out with the poets.
Then I will fly to Bagan, the old city of temples. It’s like the Kyoto or Angkor Wat of Burma. I’ll stay there for four nights, and then go on to four nights on Inle Lake. Then two days more in Yangon before coming home on New Year’s Day. The cool thing is that since I will be flying out on New Year’s Day I shall have two of them.  That strikes me as very lucky, to have two such chances to restart the year.
Oh, OK, the CSA distribution is starting. My vegetables are calling me.

Common terms and phrases

supreme court? bath/body works? ohio?

It’s so weird – someone comes to my blog often – from “supreme.court.gov” – from Columbus, Ohio – but then the server or ISP or whatever is “bathbodyworks” – not sure whether this is some sort of government surveillance or if someone comes to check out ululations from their retail job.

Softening the Blow at the Terror of the Heart of Existence

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Alyssum – heady sweet –
climbs up the bare soul’s
woozy spike.
“Everything happens for
a reason” – the so-called
 “dazzle painting.”
If someone shoots you
in the head, they had a obvious
reasoning behind it, wether it be
revenge, he/she wanted
to steal from you,
or mabey they just had Pleasure
pulling the trigger.
Metallic gasp. Fawn (faux)
husbandry. Lite tension.
What purpose
could anything
possibly serve?
Blame is like a
boomerang boomerang
a like is blame.
I have a soft lick –
do not die – little cement
empress – ache the garden,
again. With wings of cement.
1)   to stay warm in the winter.
2)   because their instincts generated
biochemical reactions that switch on behavior.
“If you look for and discover
the meaning in the random events
that happen in your life, everything
will change.”
The lynx sneaks out of the house.
The lynx spooks the house.
I have a bad impression. On my petal.
Poor caryatids – their heads.
Elegant chevrons of torment
(its hidden purr).
“You know, everything happens for a reason.”
“We wish you luck in your future endeavors.”
Vultures fly into a fiery
sky.  What time is it?
It’s happy hour in the Poconos.
“If you get in an accident and lose your leg,
it’s actually because god planned this for you,
and he wants you to learn something from it.”
Rain. Women. Song. Dry ice.
She went back to Texas
to work in hospitality
amongst ditzy sisters,
meaningless puppets tossed
on waves of cause and effect.
A little nausea is truly human.
That’s what my wife told me
on the morning of her first turkey hunt.
Justin Bieber Says
Everything Happens
for a Reason
Including Rape.
If you understand that everything
happens for a reason, than live sometimes
is much more easy.
Do I writh this wrong? Sixteen.
Sophomore. Cincinnati. I love lawling,
pretty things, and bebys ask me things xxx.
Instruments. Broody. TV. Castle. Bones.
We live out our lives
like one long sigh.

Stupor

My goodness I’ve been in such a STUPOR, partly because of all the HEAT, partly because of a robust teaching schedule (robust for summer, I mean), partly because of a feeling of immobility and sadness due to a number of factors I can’t or shouldn’t write about since that’s just “wallowing” – 
and to be honest, much of my “free” time over the past few weeks has been spent watching for the second time the first four seasons of Mad Men, to the extent that I’m more involved in the lives and problems of Don, Betty, Peggy, and Joan than I am with my own, which I suppose is the point. I even found that I had to put up my hair Mad Men style although it of course doesn’t work with my kind of hair. I just had to do something to enter that world even more completely (looking moody here, yes, amongst the bangles, in Mad Men dress with my grandmother’s blue pearl set)
but the fact is that I quite miss blogging, and on my to-do list has been the desire to at least acknowledge all the wonderful books on my nightstand – some of them new, some just new to me such as…
 
Susana Gardner’s HERSO: An Airship in Waves, so sonically lush and lacily lettristic, overlapping, anagrammatic & enigmatic:
Her her her.  Clutter amongst clutter. Starhewn dreamdust
So much piled and saved, or to be saved – causing its own
form of distraction. Mid-flight, she looked out to the sea.
Its astonishment held her.
Suzanne Stein’s tout va bien, rigorously furnished with doubt, critique, art discourse, Optima, Berkeley, American Typewriter, Optima
What’s a useful transcendentalist anti-telos in poetry and why? Or, what is the form of a “useful transcendentalist anti-telos” in poetry and why?
If cumulative behavior defines the construction, and that construction’s accretionary (aleatory) behaviors are its manifest tactics and actions, a building, or a body, as a meaning-free map, redrawn to make of itself the a priori object: the poem. Framed for right action.
I’d like to begin.
Toni Simon’s freaky-dreamy Earth After Earth – surreal new-sentence prescient-sci-fi psychedelia
There are radiation loops that drift through space and cause us to blink. I see an armored car inside a glass house. The outer coating’s invisible lens peels away the disguise. We are inherently evil negotiators in an outside world.
Dana Ward’s rambly-ecstatic This Can’t Be Life
I want to tear the heart
from refused convalescence
 & feed it those long fronds
of river bed grass. I want to
tear the heart out of style
& put it between
utter thrall & the infancy
of all things impure

Steven G. Ridgely’s Japanese Counterculture: The Antiestablishment Art of Terayama Shuji – a perceptive account of the life and exploits of the brilliant Terayama – the original multimodal appropriator!
That we are all already plagiarists is the gist of a short essay called “Tosaku-byo” (Literary kleptomania) that Terayama would write in 1961: “The first symptom of the diease is showing interest in what other people are doing.” As the condition grows more serious, the individual starts to be conceived as a part of broader society and (gasp) bgins interacting with it.  Terayama notes that since wer are the authors of our own everyday lives, it follows that brushing one’s teeth in the morning, reading the newspaper, eating food in a particular way, walking with a certain gait, and choosing appropriate clothing are all plagiarized from a set of notions of normal behavior.

and the extraordinary Advice for Lovers by Julian Talamantez Brolaski – about which I can think of nothing even constructively negative to say since every poem is a stunner. Only perhaps that there is too much hard fucking in the book? Which I don’t myself so much care for (I’m delicate)? But that reflects not on the poems:
Stellar sea cows, svelte manatees embrace
And lob their salty aloes each to each
While we graze greenly on the filtered rays
Fanned from their froth. I beg for you to teach
Me all the ways the Romans fucked, and how
Juventius, with honeyed eyes, would sit
In Catulle’s lap, and lick his salty brow.
Of all the wooing words that ere were writ
Did Bernadette choose want for wit
or skylark for a skylark’s fond embrace?

It’s possibly some of the best and sexiest verse since Brandon Brown’s The Poems of Gaius Valerius Catullus, which, OK, is admittedly not all that old (just last year!), but truly glorious:
I’ll undo the seashore from your door’s lock, unbutton the forest. I’ll lug plenty of lubricant and witticisms.  I’ll fuck you once, but it will feel like nine fucks. When you want to get away, writing feels you.  It’s always wandering; it’s always error in the other’s stupid mouth.
Each of these volumes deserves its own post, really, but it’s taken me this long just to eke out this list with its quotations, so I don’t imagine I’ll get to this task anytime soon.  Do know though that if you were to be twiddling your thumbs and were to ask me, what should I read?, I would leap to recommend all of these volumes. Get on it! So little time; so much to read…

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Beans Are Burning Bees 
Humming bowl of horseradish 
bump Burnt Chestnuts 
caterpillar mooched corn-colored 
hair crawfish bird Cream Puffs 
dance dancers Dippy the Wisp 
Egypt fairies father fire tails fish 
stars fixers flat feet George 
Hendrick girl golden cheese moon 
good-by green hat-eating horse 
green horse hats head Henry 
Hagglyhoagly huck bug hutched 
Jesse James King ladder lads long 
limber Andalusian long-nose 
looking glass mud slingers 
night oat fields Odd Fellows 
Hall Old Slicker Palace of Pickles 
Paper Sacks Peter Potato Blossom 
pink Potato Blossom Wishes 
Potato Face Blind prairie 
rabbits scarecrow scissors 
seven black rings short-nose 
Silver Pitchers sky blue cats sleep 
slutch soft Spanish Onions Spink 
and Skabootch spink bug 
stand summer never Susan 
Slackentwist Sweeter talked tell 
timothy hay told Village of Cream 
Village of Pick whag whispering 
cats whispering sky blue whispering wind