



Taking the rhetorical position for the moment that the credo of imagism was repressive, transform WCW’s admittedly beautiful little poem into something baroque. Do not remove any word or letter.
WCW’s original:
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and my version: (I broke my rule for the assignment just a little. You know why? Because I can.)
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Update: Three more versions from Anne Boyer, Shanna Compton, Maurice Burford!
http://anneboyer.tumblr.com/post/33162285086/may-the-perverts-follow-assignment-1
http://blog.shannacompton.com/2012/10/baroqueify-1.html
http://whaleace.tumblr.com/post/33164742419/baroqueify-assignment-1-response
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What if more actually is more? How can we create writing that is more sumptuous, more intense, more curvaceous, more elegant, more obscure, more grotesque, and more beautiful? Let’s traverse the ornate forms of the baroque in pursuit of a more intensely ornamental language. Using others’ texts as starting points, we will supplement, enhance, copy, modify, twist, mangle, and decorate words, syntax, structures, tropes, and concepts to maximize sublime bewilderment. We will read some essays on theories of ornament (and anti-ornament) to inform our investigations. Writers whose works we will explore may include Rabelais, Donne, M. Cavendish, Loy, Huysmans, O’Hara, Koch, and Coolidge, as well as Stacy Doris, Lisa Robertson, Brandon Brown, Adeena Karasick, Dana Ward, Corina Copp, Julian Brolaski, Charles Bernstein, and Julie Patton. “Nonpoetic” sources for poem construction will be encouraged. Not a traditional “poetry workshop,” Baroqueify! will mainly focus on analysis, discussion, and reverse-engineering of texts by others, as well as mindcurling writing exercises. Our seminar will conclude with work on performance strategies to enhance the baroque sensibilities of the writing. Come decorate this fucked-up world with me!
It’s so weird – someone comes to my blog often – from “supreme.court.gov” – from Columbus, Ohio – but then the server or ISP or whatever is “bathbodyworks” – not sure whether this is some sort of government surveillance or if someone comes to check out ululations from their retail job.
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I’m thinking… not.
Her her her. Clutter amongst clutter. Starhewn dreamdustSo much piled and saved, or to be saved – causing its ownform of distraction. Mid-flight, she looked out to the sea.Its astonishment held her.
What’s a useful transcendentalist anti-telos in poetry and why? Or, what is the form of a “useful transcendentalist anti-telos” in poetry and why?If cumulative behavior defines the construction, and that construction’s accretionary (aleatory) behaviors are its manifest tactics and actions, a building, or a body, as a meaning-free map, redrawn to make of itself the a priori object: the poem. Framed for right action.I’d like to begin.
There are radiation loops that drift through space and cause us to blink. I see an armored car inside a glass house. The outer coating’s invisible lens peels away the disguise. We are inherently evil negotiators in an outside world.
I want to tear the heartfrom refused convalescence& feed it those long frondsof river bed grass. I want totear the heart out of style& put it betweenutter thrall & the infancyof all things impure

That we are all already plagiarists is the gist of a short essay called “Tosaku-byo” (Literary kleptomania) that Terayama would write in 1961: “The first symptom of the diease is showing interest in what other people are doing.” As the condition grows more serious, the individual starts to be conceived as a part of broader society and (gasp) bgins interacting with it. Terayama notes that since wer are the authors of our own everyday lives, it follows that brushing one’s teeth in the morning, reading the newspaper, eating food in a particular way, walking with a certain gait, and choosing appropriate clothing are all plagiarized from a set of notions of normal behavior.
Stellar sea cows, svelte manatees embraceAnd lob their salty aloes each to eachWhile we graze greenly on the filtered raysFanned from their froth. I beg for you to teachMe all the ways the Romans fucked, and howJuventius, with honeyed eyes, would sitIn Catulle’s lap, and lick his salty brow.Of all the wooing words that ere were writDid Bernadette choose want for witor skylark for a skylark’s fond embrace?
I’ll undo the seashore from your door’s lock, unbutton the forest. I’ll lug plenty of lubricant and witticisms. I’ll fuck you once, but it will feel like nine fucks. When you want to get away, writing feels you. It’s always wandering; it’s always error in the other’s stupid mouth.
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